I adore this fic. I also love your Good Omens fic, but I totally forgot to review, forgive me! There are so many little treats in your writing, I don't always pick up on them the first time through. Very impressed, keep up the good work!

Omg, this story rules. It reminds me of shoebox_project :D

I like it. The last line (or two, rather) were great. I loved the Sirius quote “Oh Christ! I need that foot, it’s my favorite one!” I laughed.

This story was kinda cute and kinda funny and was an overall good mix. Great work, lollipop

I love your characters. I love your plots. I love your writing style so much that I'm hugely envious underneath the helpless giggling which is currently making my cat stare at me like I've grown an extra head. I love you! (Though maybe not in the snogging-you-in-a-bathroom sort of way...)Write more of this stuff!

The snogging was very hot, and Sirius' theatrics were amusing when he fell. You COULD end it here and it would still be good, but your writing is so good that I'm going to put it on my alert list and hope that you add more. ;.)

Very well written! I do like that your one shot had actual writing, not just "cock" here and there. I am liking your writing style. It's simple, straightforward, yet it really draws me in. )

I so LOVED this! Best RL/SB I've seen yet :D

Oh dear lord this was fantastic. Please add more. Was this supposed to be a one shot? I certainly hope not.

What I'm trying to say is that you're a fabulous writer who captures Sirius/Remus better than anyone I've ever read! Brava!

So tender, surprising, and well-described ! I loved it a lot !

Adorable!

lol cute!

So cute!

i really like it.

I love this. I love all of your stories. Sirius and Remus are just so perfect together. Plus, Sirius getting grossed out over the bathroom floor and Remus being unhelpful makes for an amusing story.

Anyway, in short, excellent job.