|Reviews for Syrup Anyone?|
| sammiepie chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
aw i liked it that was cute and funi
| tainieponee chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
Food fight in the middle of the store. Sounds fun.
| Yarbo chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
Aw I wanna get into a chocolate syrup fight with Edward. Actually I'm ok just getting into a chocolate syrup fight period. That sounds like fun...
Phenomenal job! Nice job writing something that is actually original! I'm not saying your other stories aren't original I'm just saying that it's nice you write original stories. Hehe I've used the word original three times now... well actually four.
ANYWAY - awesome...
Super Love and Cupcakes
| acrochick1992 chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
Another great one!
It made me laugh!
| SignedAnon chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
LOL Y CANT IT B ME LICKING EDWARD! I BET U HE COULD BE COVERD IN MUD FROME HEAD TO TOE AND HE WOULD STILL BE AS HOT AS A MODEL! LUV THE STORY ITS HILARIOUS I THINK I LAUGHED SO HARD THAT IM GONNA GET ABS WEN I STOP!
| hkcjphillips chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
| mayra chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
I love how Edward and Bella have fun together. Specially when it involves chocolate syrup!
| Annarina chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
Haha, awesome! Poor Edward, I'm sure it's no vampire's favorite activity to be covered in chocolate.. Unless Bella's doing the drenching, anyway.
| All.The.Pretty.Corpses chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
HAHA! This is FUNNY! :D
| briiittx xhc chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
LOL! Great story! That actually sounds like alot of fun!
| HistoryintheMaking chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
| FaerieRose13 chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
very cute and funny! I loved it.
| EllaAngel chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
That was so funny! I really enjoyed it!
| bitten-sln chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
one: i love youre name- i mean daddy'd little cannibal-
two: i love it
three:this makes me think of them making out in a chocolate covered state
| allyg1990 chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
Very funny. :)