Reviews for April Mating
MLove chapter 2 . 5/15/2013
Arghh i hate that fox! Even though it was a very cruel scene i just couldent stop laughing! Right after Kyuubi took the ball gag from under Narutos bed, i just couldent stop smiling...Naruto is quite kinky xD WHO would have thought! Haha... Omg...I am evil poor Hinata!
KuroKanashimi chapter 2 . 5/8/2013
Good...
KuroKanashimi chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Stupid.. Why? because First theres no good damn jutsu that can repair a god hymen! if there were that jutsu could be moulded too repair other more important lost parts! second.. Based off the kyuubi all naru had too do was fuck hinata within threeday... & SINCE they already fucked before... that wouldn't be a problem... honestly its just stupid... naruto has super girl with his girl basically being raped by kyuubi... i don't know if you thought this story out lol SmH
The-Oreo-Ninja chapter 3 . 2/22/2013
You said you'd write a second chapter- please continue!
Seraphina Dragon chapter 3 . 1/31/2013
hope to read more soon
datgirl chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
why did your mind think of this...really this is twisted
Guest chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
Sick just sick make one where hinata gos into narutos mind and beats the living whit out of that kiubi badgers
Sasyoura chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
hm basically its good but you should fidn a beta-reader and let him/her check it up because you use then very often. Oh and you should work on your describing of the surroundings and the feeling etc. I cant give you a really good review because uhm yeah my englisch sucks int his moment though I learned Englisch since the 6th grade. Or to better explaining, I am from germany sos orry ._. but I really like your idea and I think you can be a very good writer if you work hard on you. My hint? go and read a few books or more it can give you good ideas of plenty things
Rinnala chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
My opinion: plot was terrible what logic exactly does she follow when she frees kyuubi? I mean, me being Hinata skyld keep him tied so I had the control of pace and what not instead of letting the allpowerful insensible uncontrollable rough and uncaring KYUUBI lose on myself

Anyways she never had the image of a particularly logical person, so I guess...

But the there was the logic of Showing his penis rather than telling - my opinion stripping in front of the hokage is more embarrassing than talking about it to the headmedic...

Oh well I probably don't know anything about it anyways
Teyln chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
I would love another chapter of this story. But I don't know if I would want to see Kyuubi completely punished I don't know maybe Hinata gets hurt and it cause Kyuubi to realize his love or something? I don't know don't mind my ramblings. Get story by the way!
Silber D. Wolf chapter 3 . 8/5/2011
wow
prince of the divine wolf chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
2w
infiniteternity chapter 3 . 2/23/2011
I actually quite liked the horror element with this; the fine line between Naruto and the Kyuubi; yes it was sick, but it was also a horror. I liked the way that you wrote it...
King of the DamnD chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
this has a huge plot hole... hinata is not a whore... at least that is wat it seems to be... and she is very infatuated with naruto there is no way she would fuck the kyuubi even if he was in naruto's body considering the kyuubi is a blood thirsty monster sorry not criticizing your style just the plot that and naruto is never timid about anything he wouldnt have let hinata do that knowing full well that the kyuubi may just kill her when he's finished -.-
maihyuga chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
me: being the perv i am i drooled C8

kiba: *nosebleed* 8;]

me:*wipes drool away* nice story BTW

kiba: shit!to much blood! *pass out*
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