Reviews for April Mating
Nopenopenope chapter 3 . 12/3/2015
...seriously?
Nopenopenope chapter 1 . 12/3/2015
Not to be a little bitch about this or anything but GODDAMNDUDEYOURWRITINGSTILLSSUCKASS!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2015
Asshole
Hmmm chapter 3 . 10/29/2015
You call yourself a Hinata fan but you proceeded to make someone rape Hinata? That's not very good at all. I don't want you to be a fan of Hinata at all!
neji hyuga chapter 1 . 7/14/2014
that was fucked up
Guest chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
continue the story i like it
E-lover21 chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
I'm shocked at how pissed people are over this story. I honestly hope they're kidding. Well anyway I really liked this story.
MLove chapter 2 . 5/15/2013
Arghh i hate that fox! Even though it was a very cruel scene i just couldent stop laughing! Right after Kyuubi took the ball gag from under Narutos bed, i just couldent stop smiling...Naruto is quite kinky xD WHO would have thought! Haha... Omg...I am evil poor Hinata!
KuroKanashimi chapter 2 . 5/8/2013
Good...
KuroKanashimi chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Stupid.. Why? because First theres no good damn jutsu that can repair a god hymen! if there were that jutsu could be moulded too repair other more important lost parts! second.. Based off the kyuubi all naru had too do was fuck hinata within threeday... & SINCE they already fucked before... that wouldn't be a problem... honestly its just stupid... naruto has super girl with his girl basically being raped by kyuubi... i don't know if you thought this story out lol SmH
The-Oreo-Ninja chapter 3 . 2/22/2013
You said you'd write a second chapter- please continue!
Seraphina Dragon chapter 3 . 1/31/2013
hope to read more soon
datgirl chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
why did your mind think of this...really this is twisted
Guest chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
Sick just sick make one where hinata gos into narutos mind and beats the living whit out of that kiubi badgers
Sasyoura chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
hm basically its good but you should fidn a beta-reader and let him/her check it up because you use then very often. Oh and you should work on your describing of the surroundings and the feeling etc. I cant give you a really good review because uhm yeah my englisch sucks int his moment though I learned Englisch since the 6th grade. Or to better explaining, I am from germany sos orry ._. but I really like your idea and I think you can be a very good writer if you work hard on you. My hint? go and read a few books or more it can give you good ideas of plenty things
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