|Reviews for One Step Forward|
| Shu of the Wind chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
I like your descriptive style, and the perspective is a good one; Lilly in particular is done very well.
| Tearle chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
-I- want to know what Lilly was saying to Logan, too!
Hot story, great job.
| cherryblossomjen chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
Excellent job. When I think about Lily, I don't always remember how cutting she was. I like that she seemed to genuinely appreciate Veronica, and saw what was special about her when others didn't. Your story reminded me of her ruthlessness and intensity - and that's a good thing. True to her character and intriguing.
I hope you're writing more flashback fics in the future. :)
| stellalunacy chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
that was a good story. i really want to know what lilly said!
| mallikadhuys chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
Cute, I liked it.
Only one thing, I really wanna know what Lilly said to Logan. xD