Reviews for Dark Planet |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh oh... Please tell me you're gonna continue it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no! Please update soon. You can't leave us here with John becoming a black slime eye zombie and the team in jeopardy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH NO! They got Sheppard? I don't know if I can keep reading. The suspense is incredible. Great imagery here. Truly gross. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sheppard always end up unconscious and being dragged/carried by the bad guys, huh? LOL. I love how you continue to build the tension. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great scary chapter. This story is quite terrifying. I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no, poor Lorne. I hope he can recover. How Sheppard to sacrifice himself and go alone rather than risk the whole team. This story is so scary. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how in character everyone and their dialogue is, especially for the stress of the situation. You actually made me jump a little with the slimy thing jumping on Rodney. I was in complete sympathy with his freak-out and revulsion. Your writing continues to be very evocative. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Completely creepy. You really set the scene well. Very Mad Max/ Resident Evil I. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start. Very foreboding. You've got me all worried for poor Lorne and our team. |
![]() ![]() Awesome update MrsB. Sorry it took me so long to read. I hope to read more soon. :D |
![]() ![]() Very exciting! :D I wonder what or who is trying to get inside of the room. And what will happen to the guys, and Teyla up in the shaft. :P Awesome job MrsB. You do so weel with the angst... ;) Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great update! I wonder who or what is on the other side of that door. Please update soon! LOL, the part about Rodney's encounters with Ronon's backside. Too funny! I'm still laughing at that one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG, MORE PLEASE! What a cliff hanger, I need more! Thank you for sharing your writings with us! |
![]() ![]() WOW! MrsB. You do creepy so well. *smiles* I hope you don't make us wait too long to see what happens next. :D You can't leave Shep like that forever. Hee hee. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eww! The black goo stuff sounds so gross! LOL And that creepy smile on Lorne's face all the time is really scary! Awesome job, loved it and I can't wait to read more of this :D Wonder what will happen to him. If he'll go crazy and creepy like the rest of them. There has to be a cure though! Right? :P Update soon, pretty please! |