Reviews for Dark Planet
Cielito chapter 1 . 4/7/2008

*Camy hugs Mrs. B*
cimmer chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
I'm all for anything with Lorne whump in it. I like the Major and he deserves some time in the spotlight.
Scifan chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
WOW! MrsB. That's really creapy, but awesome. :D

Waiting for more and glad you're muse is starting to come back. :)
Foxyinthecity chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
*blinking my eyes* Could it be a SGA story from you know who?

Creepy! You have my interest peak! Now, I can only wonder what horrors Sheppard and his team will face along with Lorne and his team.

Please update!
Obsessedfringey chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
"“Taken by darkness,” he whispered." OK. Ronon believed it and that is enough for me. i'm alreeady shakin' in my boots. (hmm... i'm not wearing boots.)

" as he began their descent into the darkest land any of them had ever known." Well... that's saying something for them lot! LOL.

Great story, brilliantly written with pace and growing tension. I'm gripping the edge of my seat just waiting for an update. I can't give costructive criticism because - you see- there's nothing wrong with it that I could see. It's perfect. I also love the thought of having to rescue Lorne and his team for once because it's always our top-team that are in trouble. It makes a nice change, but thinking of it, team whump is still brill.

How do you get so many ideas? How do you write so easily and fluently? LOL.

Anyhoo... please update soon, i love the story.

YappiChick chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
Do my eyes deceive me? A fic from you! To quote Elfie "SQUE!"

Awesomely creepy dude...Poor Lorne! :( Who knows what wickedness the team will find before him and his team?
rubycaspar chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
OH! Nice start MrsB - this is really intriguing! I love the concept of the 'ruined planet', and nice suspense with Lorne being missing... can't wait to see where you're going with this.

TeylaFan chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
Oh WOW! That was so great!

It was almost like *shudder* Cause you discribed it so well, that I could almost see it! And that's good - but I wouldn't want to be on that 'ruined planet' along with the team! ;)

Great start! :D Keep it up! ;)
Linda66 chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
Oh i love this MrsB...Very creepy as always...No one can do creepy like you...Can't wait for the next part!
AthosionWarrior chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
ohh sounds intraesting. cant wait for more update soon. please
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