|Reviews for What Now?|
| Guest chapter 22 . 4/3/2013
This is so interesting! But kind of weird that danial is pregnant with Carlisle's baby. Hope Jacob and the baby will be safe once it's born! Please update soon! ;):):):)
| DevilGene chapter 12 . 9/12/2012
i don't want danial to be pregnant,,, cause me being a girl i know how much it will hurt esme if she become pregnant...but mpreg's i love...
| DevilGene chapter 3 . 9/12/2012
want this to be mpreg...jake's the pregnant one for me of course...
| fiction of fans chapter 2 . 8/26/2011
Sorry, but this story is painful. It's moving far too fast and it's incredibly unrealistic. Yes, it's fantasy but you need to at least hold on to normality a little bit. Um, I think you also need some spelling lessons as it's quite dismal.
| baby A chapter 4 . 6/27/2011
| edwardxharry lover chapter 4 . 3/11/2010
I love your story keep it up!
| Zainab chapter 4 . 3/1/2010
Ignore the tightwads who leave nothing but audacious and snide comments.
I have to admit that SOME of the stuff that they are saying is true, but for every insult there is also a... (I'm lost for words) but anyway, there are also good things about your story.
KEEP AT IT, CAUSE YOUR DOIN' FINE!
(MY GRAMMAR AND PUNCUATION SUCKS!)
| sweetteatwo chapter 22 . 2/21/2010
Love how the charcter's seem real,
Hope they kick some demon butt.
please up date when you can.
| sweetteatwo chapter 13 . 2/21/2010
I like this fic but if the witch and carlisle
end up togather i will stop readding this
story, glad that Jacob admitted that he loves
| sweetteatwo chapter 12 . 2/21/2010
again let esme and carlisle stay togather
and raise the baby. glad the witch was able
to let her brother know something.
| sweetteatwo chapter 11 . 2/21/2010
still want Carlisle and Esme
to still betogather.
| nequam-tenshi chapter 22 . 10/14/2009
make Jacob have 3 or 4 children since Edward wants to change him after he gives birth.
| mia-dcwut-09 chapter 22 . 9/28/2009
i read this fic along time ago
and i totally forgot to review
i love it you're mixing magic and twilight love it
| Lazerhawk chapter 12 . 4/22/2009
I like the story and the ideal. and I aslo like the ideal of Carlsie becomeing a father. I say go for it. and Please keep Edward and Jake together.
| Lazerhawk chapter 11 . 4/22/2009
I like this story and the ideal. I say keep Carslie and Esme togther and let them raise his and Danial baby as their own.