Reviews for Now You See It: A Narration
son of the olympians chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
I'm liking it except Max's title was "magic max" not "Mr. Max"
xx'Gothic-Manga-Girl'xx chapter 5 . 1/29/2010
Aww this chapter was adorable! Please continue this, it's so good. Ttyl.
DramaQueen524 chapter 5 . 10/15/2009
awesome story! i love it so far!
CamelliaxBloom chapter 5 . 8/16/2009
Very cute story, just recently found this movie again after years of looking for it :)

Sorry to hear about all of your woes, and hopefully it gets better for you soon.
James's Baby Girl chapter 5 . 5/20/2009
I think that my favorite chapter in this story is chapter I thought that you were gonna make them kiss. I llove you're stories they are ausome and when you get a chance do you think that you could make up some more capters for this story please and thankyou
James's Baby Girl chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
when are you ging to put up new chapters I wanna see Aly and Danny do it or at least kiss I got hooked on this story and I wanna find out more so could you please e-mail me at
Joe Jonas's girl chapter 5 . 4/23/2009
I think you should go back and put a kissing scene in here right where Danny has Alyson in his lap would be perfert but its like after he was done singing she looked into his eyes and they kissed and said I love you to eachother and then make love on the table down there
Joe Jonas's girl chapter 5 . 4/23/2009
OMJ I love the part where Alyson basicly throws herself at Danny and tells him not to leave I also Love Love Love the part where danny holds Alyson in his lap and she just sits there listning to his heart beat and then Danny singing. It's a turn on for me if a guy can sing and play guitar like Danny. I realy strongly think that you should finish this story. please pleas please
Joe Jonas's girl chapter 4 . 4/23/2009
OMJ I thought that the best 2 parts in this one was when the bat flew at Aly and she ran into Danny's ches and he held her there asking if she was ok so cute. The second pard ws when they were sitting on the floor and she coulden't find Danny he pulled her into his lap that was realy cute too.
Joe Jonas's girl chapter 3 . 4/23/2009
OMJ that was so cute the way thier fingers intertwined that was ausome. you serously need to write more Now You See It stories maby some with austual lemon in it like how bout this Danny and Aly are going to the secret room to do some more research and they end up having sex in there and Danny gets Aly pregnat and Max tries to take the baby away from them . That would be an ausome story
Joe Jonas's girl chapter 2 . 4/23/2009
OMJ I thought that was so cute.I love the part where Alyson falls asleap on Danny. True genius and verry romantic you have to write more soon please,please,please(puppy dog eyes)
Angelical Lady chapter 5 . 12/9/2008
Oww,so cute the secret library scene!*0*

Your story is soo cute..it's how the movie should have been...with all this AllysonxDanny parts!

I'm anxiously waiting for the next chapter...update it soon,ok?

;**
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 5 . 10/11/2008
AH! _ This is the best 'NYSI' story I've read yet! And I've read quite a few!

The last part, and whenever there's a Danny/Allyson moment, really! U

Rock on! Brilliant! I can't WAIT for the update! U *U*

Ever-so sincerely signed,

Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)

P.S.- What's the song Danny and Allyson are singing?
james is my boi chapter 5 . 10/10/2008
i like it
wholockedfan13 chapter 5 . 10/7/2008
what? No Make out? aww come give us one:D anyway I really do like this start it up again?
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