Reviews for These Are All Things You Don't Understand
TheVastEmptiness chapter 13 . 1/8
I really, really hope you haven't abandoned this story. It's wonderful.
Guest chapter 8 . 11/30/2014
I love you
RinneLin chapter 13 . 11/27/2014
oh wow. what an emotional roller coaster this is. brilliantly written!
seatides chapter 13 . 11/22/2014
I cannot tell you how much I enjoy your writing style. I love the hidden thoughts in parentheses, how Kakashi is trying so hard to convince himself that it doesn't matter through these repetitive little things that build up until he can barely keep himself together. You really know how to get into the heads of these characters.

I like how you made the shinobi world so dark. You have revealed another side that not a lot of people talk about, and it is that ninja are people who are used as tools for killing through seduction, through subterfuge and manipulation, and it's not just about the guilt that comes from killing your target but the fake emotional bonds that you have to make to get close to kill them. It's a wonder how Kakashi has managed to keep it together for so long (albeit it doesn't seem for much longer).

It seems like the entirety of Kakashi's life is revolved around "too little too late". That one line that you wrote: "Kakashi is fucked up" left such an impact because it doesn't NEARLY encompass how fucked up he really is, but it was so straightforward and in your face that it just contrasted so starkly against the rest of the story where Kakashi just skirts around truths and lies so that he can somehow protect himself. You have somehow made him clinical and emotional to both extremes, and it just makes the readers realize just how lost Kakashi has become. His resolution to separate himself from Minato is heartbreaking, to say the least, because I feel that Minato is practically the only person who could help Kakashi, and the fact that Kakashi seems to somehow realize this and is terrified of this (because it would BREAK him) while repeating to himself that "it doesn't matter" makes this story so incredibly powerful and emotional and I really just can't get over your writing style.

I really can't tell you how much I enjoyed this, and how horrified and sad I am about what has happened to Kakashi. You have broken my heart over and over again, ESPECIALLY with this last chapter since Minato has JUST reached a decision and now Kakashi might not even be there anymore.

Thank you so much for writing this. Excuse me while I go read all your Kakashi stories.
myeve123 chapter 13 . 9/17/2014
Wow. You sure know how to write UST. A delicious read, full of emotional punches.
Bloody-Destination chapter 13 . 8/24/2014
You a ho! When you gonna update again, hmmm?
nazebaka chapter 13 . 5/18/2014
This is really intense, almost too intense for me. But I like how realistic the emotions are written, and how you've done Kakashi's internal debate about his own personality. Great writing, and a lot of emotion in there too! You really know how to pack a scene full of tension!

-nazebaka
Guest chapter 1 . 4/10/2014
Please please please keep writing! This is the hottest fanfiction I've ever read!
Fishcake-9 chapter 13 . 12/26/2013
Nyaaaaaa! So good! Hehe, the inner pervert I me talking . . . Please keep writing! This is an awesome fanfiction!
Salia Glacerious chapter 13 . 10/11/2013
I have not been on this site in almost a year because of not being able to find works that I favor. You are a brilliant writer, I love all of your works, and your writings have introduced me to other writers whom I am now adoring. I just finished all thirteen chapters and do not even get me started on all of the emotions that I feel and how impressed I am with your writing style. You have inspired me to write again on this site, thank you!
MysteriousEyez chapter 13 . 8/26/2013
Such a shame to see a great story with lots of action not be updated for over 3 years. I do hope you plan on continuing this someday because we are at such an interesting point in the story and for it to stay like this wouldn't be right at all.
Schattenspieler chapter 13 . 8/3/2013
Es ist wirklich egal wenn ich jetzt auf Deutsch schreibe, da du ja offenbar sowieso nicht auf dein Profil oder deine Kommentare siehst. Ergo: Du wirst es vermutlich nicht lesen...

Ich kann nur immer wieder betonen wie großartig ich deine Geschichte finde!
Dieser Witz den du bei so einem düsteren Thema und einem so beängstigenden Verlauf immer wieder einbaust ist grandios!
Ich liebe deinen schwarzen Humor und es passt immer! Es grenzt direkt an Genie. Ich finde es sehr geschickt wie du Elemente aus früheren Kapiteln immer wieder aufgreifst und nochmals einbindest, in den Textverlauf. Ich bewundere das sehr und wünschte ich wäre auch so geschickt im schreiben. Es gibt dem ganzen etwas Manisches und ich liebe das potenzial zum Wahnsinn
Auch finde ich die Wechsel der Personen gut - mal bist du beim Hokage, bei Rin, bei Minato und bei Kakashi. Hey du warst noch nicht bei Obitos leben und wesen!? XD Lücke! Fühle sie!

Nun obwohl hier nie wieder was kommt, empfehle ich die Geschichte weiter, weil sie es verdient, auch wenn sie noch unvollkommen ist!

Das Schlimmste ist eigentlich das deine Ansetze so unvorhersehbar und komplex sind, das ich wirklich nicht weis wie alles ausgehen soll - man kann kaum weiter träumen für sich selbst. ._.'
Überleben Kakashi und Obito? Scheitert ihre Mission? Verrät Kakashi seine Gefühle? Hat Minato auch solche Gefühle? Warum sonst sollte er so schlecht gelaunt sein über Kakashis fehlen oder Abschottung als er wieder da ist?
Treffen sie vielleicht auf einen Ninja der das Brodel besucht hat und Kakashis andere Persona kennt?
Es gibt so viele Möglichkeiten die ich mir nicht mal ausmahlen kann! Es ist Frustrierend!

Das einzige was ich schade fand, ist das die Kapitel manchmal etwas kurz sind.
Und der einzige Fehler der mit unter die Augen gekommen ist das du Minato mal einen Weißen mantel gegeben hast obwohl er nicht Hokage ist. Ich verstehe natürlich das Minato verdammt heiß in dem Mantel aussieht - aber ich bezweifle das er als Jonin schon einen Mantel hatte. XD

Wenn du das liest: Bitte schreib weiter! Ist mir egal ob dein Schreibstil sich geändert hat und es einem Bruch in der Geschichte gibt. Aber ich will wissen was das Schicksal unserer Schätze ist!
Bitte komm zurück zu !
anon chapter 13 . 7/2/2013
I hope you come back to this story someday. It's excellent.
ABundleOfDaydreams chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
:)
Schattenspieler chapter 13 . 2/25/2013
Okay, 2010 was the last Updated? Where's the rest? o.o '
It was just exciting! Well, it was always exciting so that's not really a agument but I want reported as emanating! Q_Q
Why really great stories are never finished? It was so shocking, so scary, so bitter sweet - it was great! Or to put it better, it would be great if it had an end. -. - '
I have pursued with such enthusiasm the story that I will not believe the rivet it continues. Why is that? It would be really nice if you stopped. That you're not us readers guilty, but you start the story you!
Greetings Schattenspieler
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