Reviews for Awaken Sleeper |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad I stuck around. Finally, Harry is something more than Summer's hound |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know you wanted Harry to be a mirror of Dresden, but man, it's hard to root for a character who is so absolutely buggered by the Sidhe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A nice chapter. If only it didn't end with Harry being Summer's calling dog |
![]() ![]() ![]() And the dumb decisions come to light |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry seemed relatively intelligent in the previous chapters, but the Dresden dumb decisions really start striking from this point |
![]() ![]() ![]() The jump from Potter aesthetic to Dresden was done as well as it could have been this chapter, but I didn't like it. I wish you had kept the Potter aesthetic (no smoking or random sex) and continued with the plot; it was working well enough for you in the earlier chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aiden's inclusion seems to be removing any agency Harry has. He's dragging the plot of the story this way and that, and Harry is reacting ineffectively, so it's like Aiden is the real main character of the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This seems like a serious fic, but it also seems like a great premise for a comedy fic, where Harry is actually insane and pretending he's a secret wizard in a world where there's no magic. |
![]() ![]() Sooooo. Harry gets all noble because Peter is harassing a lady. During his "rescue " heroics he has to be saved not once but twice by women. Then he proceeds to stalk and, not taking no for an answer, harass the same lady himself? And there's an official goon squad to suppress magicals? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is without a doubt one of the best fanfics I have ever read, over all of the fandoms that I read in. I love the Dresden Files and there is not nearly enough quality crossover fics between it and Potter so this fic is a real joy. I especially like Harry's relationship with Aurora in this fic and how it grows and develops throughout. The banter between Dresden and Potter is a joy to read, the way how you make them bounce off of eachother is just brilliant. I know this story is most likely abandoned, it hasnt been updated in years, but nevertheless I would have loved to see where you were going with this and the resolution between Harry and Aurora. Awaken Sleeper is a great fic, even if it is sadly abandoned. Great job author! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooof. Seems like Aiden is the better seer?clairvoiant between the two. |
![]() ![]() ![]() He should find a snake to attempt speaking to |
![]() ![]() ![]() You may have abandoned a lot of Dresden canon, but we still got a Pizza Lord! So you've hit one of the two most important canon events there. The other one obviously being the 'Za Lord's mighty steed, Sue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() its getting irritatted from here... the story devided from the main idea i think... i thought this story is between harry and harrison. .. not my cup of tea... |
![]() ![]() I have to say, this is one of the finest stories I’ve ever read. So well written, so thought out. It’s a shame it isn’t being continued. I would absolutely love to see where it was going. I hope you come back to it one day. |