Reviews for Awaken Sleeper
BillyTheBruiser chapter 4 . 7/11
Not gonna lie this Harry is kind of annoying. He has been acting more like an edgy 14 yo than a 20 yo for now. Especially the "It's a curse mark, bitch", lmao actually cracked me up cause of cringe. The story definitely shows promise, though so I guess we'll see.
XXxxxadisxxxXX chapter 27 . 6/2
This fic is very, very dead, but it was fun while it lasted. The cliffhanger fucking hurts though...
Mastersgtjames chapter 10 . 4/5
Almost feel like Luna would have been a better choice for this story than harry.
Mastersgtjames chapter 3 . 4/5
So... Hopefully MC was really studious, and knows all kinds of magic. Wards, Enchantment, Rituals, Charms, etc... Cuz crossover stories where the MC does not have the thing that makes them, or their world/story unique, are retarded. I mean, like those harry potter to ASOIAF crossovers where the MC does not have magic, and sometimes does not remember their old life. It defeats the purpose. might as well use an OC.
Hope MC still has the Hallows. Maybe have him able to summon them.

These questions may well be answered in later chapters. But I prefer to comment on "the story so far". since I am not going to read all the way to the end, then go bad to comment chapter by chapter.
OriksGaming chapter 26 . 3/29
It's a shame you abandoned this story. I don't want to overrate it the way my nostalgia would like me to and say it's perfect, but it was a damn good read. You did a really great job of getting me invested in events I already knew long enough to get to the part where significant changes began happening and it got even more exciting. I really enjoyed all of the character interactions, the way Harry's relationship with his 'family' ended up, the way the plot was heading . . .

I'm genuinely very disappointed I'll never get to see where you were going with it and where the story was meant to end; even if that was only going to be a few more chapters as per your profile, or twice the length of what exists now and forevermore. I'm sad I'll never see events that were heavily foreshadowed, such as Harry embracing Summer Fire and his less than human side or the continuation of his relationship with Aurora. I especially like Aurora. You built her character practically from the ground up and made her genuinely likable while still being cold, manipulative, and constantly scheming.

In any case, I come back to the story every couple months and enjoy it every time. It didn't end in a terrible place despite the minor cliffhanger and I can at least imagine for myself what happens soon after. Like almost anyone still commenting on this story, I do wish you'd continue it; but I fully understand that if you dropped it, it was likely for a good reason and that any chance you'll come back to it at this point is vanishingly small. I wish you well in whatever you're doing in life at this point. I'm sure I'll be back here in another few months.
A Businessman chapter 27 . 3/19
Please continue this, it's really good.
keeperofthevoid chapter 27 . 12/16/2020
Please finish this story! It's amazing and I have realky enjoyed it.
Newland Archer chapter 27 . 9/25/2020
Damn, that was an amazing story. I really hope you get back to it one day. Would love to see more of it.
Guest chapter 27 . 6/27/2020
Still my favourite story on the site, re read this annually, Just wish it had been completed or we atleast got to see the Harry & Aurora pay off.
n740 chapter 3 . 6/17/2020
it will be much less complicated if he was just Harrison with harry memory instead of harry took Harrison body and the reason he have his memory because Harrison was a seer
Astra Across the Stars chapter 27 . 6/9/2020
Ahhhhh I’m rereading this for probably the third time and I would LOVE to see it continued. I don’t know what’s going on in your life right now, but even though I’ve never read the Dresden Files, I think you have melded these worlds so brilliantly, and I desperately want more. Your characters are engaging, plot thrilling, and prose lovely. If you ever decide to come back to this project, you’ll have at least one eager reader.
mddomene chapter 27 . 4/25/2020
This was great, the kind of great that makes you not even want to search for something alike because of it0s unlikelyhood of existence.
Guest chapter 27 . 1/11/2020
A bit too much tone whiplash and silly stuff, too crackish to really be immersive.

The attempt at humour should be toned down a tad. Especially those regarding the romantic bit, from the movie reference, to a movie few people would have seen nowadays, and ridiculous blackmail, to the talk about heirs, it just felt flat.
Guest chapter 27 . 1/11/2020

It's…guardian - Its…guardian

sheer your mind - shear your mind
jstacuriousguy chapter 1 . 9/16/2019
One thing I noticed was that you kept changing the age of Aiden. Apart from that it is a fantastic read so far.
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