Reviews for Awaken Sleeper
NotInigoMontoya chapter 20 . 1/14
You may have abandoned a lot of Dresden canon, but we still got a Pizza Lord! So you've hit one of the two most important canon events there.

The other one obviously being the 'Za Lord's mighty steed, Sue.
anjiepotter chapter 10 . 1/12
its getting irritatted from here... the story devided from the main idea i think... i thought this story is between harry and harrison. .. not my cup of tea...
Blackknife chapter 27 . 11/20/2021
I have to say, this is one of the finest stories I’ve ever read. So well written, so thought out. It’s a shame it isn’t being continued. I would absolutely love to see where it was going. I hope you come back to it one day.
Volunteer Insomniac chapter 5 . 11/19/2021
where did all of the caution hammered into him about the statute of secrecy go? why's he acting so unprofessional? years of training and going through a literal war, and a years of schooling telling him nor to break the statute of secrecy and he just breaks it as soon as he gets a new wand?
Volunteer Insomniac chapter 6 . 11/19/2021
at the moment he acts more like a teenager than a 20 year old with wizard military training.
Volunteer Insomniac chapter 4 . 11/19/2021
why does it keep seemingly randomly saying 'deep magic'?
and why is Harry so dismissive of Aiden? he was an auror, he probably dealt with weird and hard to explain stuff all the time, so why is he going "huh, why are you pointing into an alleyway? it's not like there's anything magical about it." he sound more like one of those annoying characters where they refuse to open their eyes and look at what's in front of them, and just see a guy get murdered and say "they're probably just wrestling".

this is a good story, but in my opinion I would have it so Harry collects up the deathly hallows, but instead of becoming master of death (come on, death is a primordial force, it wouldn't let mortals become it's master) he just earns himself the second life after he is killed (boom, explanation for reincarnation) the hallows are destroyed, and I would make the brother less 'godly and more 'swept up in the current' so he is more 'with' Harry' instead of 'I have seen the entire future of the universe, I am a god, you are just following in my footsteps', you know, make him more 'clueless young brother' than 'I am older than existence'.
and I would make Harry less clueless and more of an expert in an unknown environment.

but this is a good story, I'm just being a backseat driver.
Volunteer Insomniac chapter 4 . 11/19/2021
I don't get how Harry is using the internet and stuff to study and other things because the internet only started getting widely used around 1995 and 2001.
DarkBan chapter 23 . 10/17/2021
Okay, i did NOT see that coming.
BobTheSkrull chapter 27 . 10/16/2021
Well, with the assumption you aren't dead, I just want to say that I'm glad you made it this far. Too often I see ambitious fics ended from burnout or unrelated obstacles without ever showing off the scenes people really wanted to see. Things like the endgame for the Harry/Aurora ship, Margaret's return and reunion with her children, and even the little things like how the banter plays out.

Seriously, thank you. I somehow missed this chapter the first time it came out, but I'm glad I read it years later.
ArchmagePeverell chapter 7 . 10/8/2021
Shitty personality this harry has
BillyTheBruiser chapter 4 . 7/11/2021
Not gonna lie this Harry is kind of annoying. He has been acting more like an edgy 14 yo than a 20 yo for now. Especially the "It's a curse mark, bitch", lmao actually cracked me up cause of cringe. The story definitely shows promise, though so I guess we'll see.
XXxxxadisxxxXX chapter 27 . 6/2/2021
This fic is very, very dead, but it was fun while it lasted. The cliffhanger fucking hurts though...
Mastersgtjames chapter 10 . 4/5/2021
Almost feel like Luna would have been a better choice for this story than harry.
Mastersgtjames chapter 3 . 4/5/2021
So... Hopefully MC was really studious, and knows all kinds of magic. Wards, Enchantment, Rituals, Charms, etc... Cuz crossover stories where the MC does not have the thing that makes them, or their world/story unique, are retarded. I mean, like those harry potter to ASOIAF crossovers where the MC does not have magic, and sometimes does not remember their old life. It defeats the purpose. might as well use an OC.
Hope MC still has the Hallows. Maybe have him able to summon them.

These questions may well be answered in later chapters. But I prefer to comment on "the story so far". since I am not going to read all the way to the end, then go bad to comment chapter by chapter.
OriksGaming chapter 26 . 3/29/2021
It's a shame you abandoned this story. I don't want to overrate it the way my nostalgia would like me to and say it's perfect, but it was a damn good read. You did a really great job of getting me invested in events I already knew long enough to get to the part where significant changes began happening and it got even more exciting. I really enjoyed all of the character interactions, the way Harry's relationship with his 'family' ended up, the way the plot was heading . . .

I'm genuinely very disappointed I'll never get to see where you were going with it and where the story was meant to end; even if that was only going to be a few more chapters as per your profile, or twice the length of what exists now and forevermore. I'm sad I'll never see events that were heavily foreshadowed, such as Harry embracing Summer Fire and his less than human side or the continuation of his relationship with Aurora. I especially like Aurora. You built her character practically from the ground up and made her genuinely likable while still being cold, manipulative, and constantly scheming.

In any case, I come back to the story every couple months and enjoy it every time. It didn't end in a terrible place despite the minor cliffhanger and I can at least imagine for myself what happens soon after. Like almost anyone still commenting on this story, I do wish you'd continue it; but I fully understand that if you dropped it, it was likely for a good reason and that any chance you'll come back to it at this point is vanishingly small. I wish you well in whatever you're doing in life at this point. I'm sure I'll be back here in another few months.
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