He should find a snake to attempt speaking to

You may have abandoned a lot of Dresden canon, but we still got a Pizza Lord! So you've hit one of the two most important canon events there.

The other one obviously being the 'Za Lord's mighty steed, Sue.

its getting irritatted from here... the story devided from the main idea i think... i thought this story is between harry and harrison. .. not my cup of tea...

I have to say, this is one of the finest stories I’ve ever read. So well written, so thought out. It’s a shame it isn’t being continued. I would absolutely love to see where it was going. I hope you come back to it one day.

where did all of the caution hammered into him about the statute of secrecy go? why's he acting so unprofessional? years of training and going through a literal war, and a years of schooling telling him nor to break the statute of secrecy and he just breaks it as soon as he gets a new wand?

at the moment he acts more like a teenager than a 20 year old with wizard military training.

why does it keep seemingly randomly saying 'deep magic'?
and why is Harry so dismissive of Aiden? he was an auror, he probably dealt with weird and hard to explain stuff all the time, so why is he going "huh, why are you pointing into an alleyway? it's not like there's anything magical about it." he sound more like one of those annoying characters where they refuse to open their eyes and look at what's in front of them, and just see a guy get murdered and say "they're probably just wrestling".

this is a good story, but in my opinion I would have it so Harry collects up the deathly hallows, but instead of becoming master of death (come on, death is a primordial force, it wouldn't let mortals become it's master) he just earns himself the second life after he is killed (boom, explanation for reincarnation) the hallows are destroyed, and I would make the brother less 'godly and more 'swept up in the current' so he is more 'with' Harry' instead of 'I have seen the entire future of the universe, I am a god, you are just following in my footsteps', you know, make him more 'clueless young brother' than 'I am older than existence'.
and I would make Harry less clueless and more of an expert in an unknown environment.

but this is a good story, I'm just being a backseat driver.

I don't get how Harry is using the internet and stuff to study and other things because the internet only started getting widely used around 1995 and 2001.

Okay, i did NOT see that coming.

Well, with the assumption you aren't dead, I just want to say that I'm glad you made it this far. Too often I see ambitious fics ended from burnout or unrelated obstacles without ever showing off the scenes people really wanted to see. Things like the endgame for the Harry/Aurora ship, Margaret's return and reunion with her children, and even the little things like how the banter plays out.

Seriously, thank you. I somehow missed this chapter the first time it came out, but I'm glad I read it years later.

Shitty personality this harry has

Not gonna lie this Harry is kind of annoying. He has been acting more like an edgy 14 yo than a 20 yo for now. Especially the "It's a curse mark, bitch", lmao actually cracked me up cause of cringe. The story definitely shows promise, though so I guess we'll see.

This fic is very, very dead, but it was fun while it lasted. The cliffhanger fucking hurts though...

Almost feel like Luna would have been a better choice for this story than harry.

So... Hopefully MC was really studious, and knows all kinds of magic. Wards, Enchantment, Rituals, Charms, etc... Cuz crossover stories where the MC does not have the thing that makes them, or their world/story unique, are retarded. I mean, like those harry potter to ASOIAF crossovers where the MC does not have magic, and sometimes does not remember their old life. It defeats the purpose. might as well use an OC.
Hope MC still has the Hallows. Maybe have him able to summon them.

These questions may well be answered in later chapters. But I prefer to comment on "the story so far". since I am not going to read all the way to the end, then go bad to comment chapter by chapter.