I am really enjoying the depth into the Dresden universe and the inclusion of Elaine as a major character. The story of what happened to Harrison's soul is very interesting to me and I hope it's touched upon soon or at the end of the story. My main complaint with this story is that Harry Potter acts almost exactly like Harry Dresden - full of anger and a suicidal desire for independent from even the thought of someone having power over him. I worry that there isn't enough separation between them and that you're just telling Dresden's story in the body of HP. I look forward to continuing this story.

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next chapter please

the fight was too long in this chapter. it really dragged out. consider making it shorter

don't let Harry train him it's a waste of time

a simple accio could have got the briefcase

I hate that he can be soulgazed

"time marjoram"

Like Time Thyme? Misused once it's a typo. Misused multiple times is ignorance.

"Time immemorial (French: temps immémorial) is a phrase meaning time extending beyond the reach of memory, record, or tradition, indefinitely ancient, "ancient beyond memory or record" - Wikipedia

Thanks for the chapter _.

Hi this story is really great! I was wondering when you were going to update next?

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nice

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Yooo this really needs to be updatted