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![]() ![]() ![]() They have so much chemistry...why were they not the couple? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this one. You should turn this into a story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved your stories. I think some you should make into a longer story but what can I say. I had a big smile the whole time I was reading them. Specially the vinnie and Charlie |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this. You should make this into a full story. I am sure you could at least make it into 3 or 4 chapters |
![]() ![]() You’re aamIng and wonderful ;) |
![]() ![]() This chapter is inspired - truly inspired, I tell you! :) And the ending is so sweet and adorable! *hugs* |
![]() ![]() This chapter is so awesome and adorable! :) *hugs* You've also got me wondering about the other Mice's haircut arrangements prior to crashlanding on Earth... did Modo's wife, niece, and / or Momma cut his? Did Vinnie's mom cut his before he left Mars; and did he cut his own all the time afterwards? Does Carbine cut her own hair, and / or did Throttle ever trim hers for her? Inquiring minds want to know! ;) |
![]() ![]() Oh, wow - this chapter is so awesome! :) And you have clearly put a lot of thought and research into working out how the Mice might react to extreme weather like this, it's fantastic! *hugs* |
![]() ![]() This chapter is both adorable and incredibly insightful on so many levels - thank you so much for this! :) *hugs* |
![]() ![]() Oh, this is priceless! :D |
![]() ![]() BWA-HA-HA-HA! :D How did this not happen on the show? How?! *hugs* |
![]() ![]() This is hilarious! :D |
![]() ![]() ...oh, poor Vinnie. :) Snakes... why did it have to be a giant f-king snake?! |
![]() ![]() This is such a cute songfic chapter - thank you so much! :) *hugs* |
![]() ![]() BWA-HA-HA-HA! :D Oh, this is pure genius! *hugs* Carbine proclaiming her undying love to Charley due to a massage - seriously, how the frak do you come up with gems like these? How?! I am in awe. :) |