|Reviews for The First|
| Guest chapter 64 . 2/10
Actually, from what I've been reading on the blogs, the admins had a COMPELLING reason to clean house and to take down the MA and graphic stuff.
Any minor could open and read anything on this site. If they'd opened some of that stuff, an angry parent with a lawyer could have shut the whole thing down. This site's too special to too many people to lose in that way.
Anyone can click on an age statement or sign up for a password. They're no defense.
I've heard that some of the explicit stuff was child porn, If true, people it's only disgusting, but illegal. Illegal to host and to read. Serious legal penalties could have been coming to whoever wrote it, as well as to the site owners.
It was always against the terms of service you agreed to to post the strong stuff here, and just because folks had grown comfortable with flouting the rules doesn't mean there were no rules in place.
| Dragon77 chapter 73 . 2/1
Aww this chapter was very touching.
| LSophieH chapter 40 . 2/1
Holy moly someone actually managed to get 'squirrels go boom boom' in. My life is now complete. As is my keyboard, in tea, which i dropped from laughing.
| LSophieH chapter 39 . 2/1
The one liners in themselves make for brilliant reading :-) I laughed at the scissors one so loudly I woke up my boyf sleeping on the sofa. Ahhh, life :-) I love your stuff.
| LSophieH chapter 29 . 2/1
Honestly teared up a little bit... beautifully written this one. One of my favourites anyway :-)
| TheFarFire chapter 28 . 1/30
Loved the medical/biological details in this one, interesting and realistic! x
| TheFarFire chapter 23 . 1/30
I was not expecting that! Great (but terrible!) twist for Vinnie! [cryface] x
| TheFarFire chapter 11 . 1/29
Woooooow. Beautiful interpretation of the scene. You're right, people really never talked much about their psychic abilities! I'm really enjoying this series, thanks for sharing all these ideas, it's been great to relive it all. You have a really good grasp of the boys' mannerisms especially! x
| MayaPatch chapter 73 . 1/28
Throttle's father a professor! LOOOL That's cool!
And Vinnie's one... well It explains a lot...
And... poor Modo!
| ReptilesTheme chapter 73 . 1/28
I love this fic. Enough chapters to read over and over without getting bored‼ I always kind of assumed their fathers passed away in the war, but seeing that they never mention these fathers, I also assumed they weren't close.
Can we submit ideas for a first? I got an idea cooking, but not sure if I should write and submit or just pass the idea on...
| baby-kitsune9 chapter 73 . 1/27
um. I sent an idea to add to the 'firsts' and was wondering what you thought of it.
| Susan M. M chapter 73 . 1/27
You're right. We heard a lot about Modo's grey-furred mama, but not one word of his papa or anyone else's.
| Zuzanny chapter 73 . 1/27
That was really sad, but nicely handled.
| 1Timberwolf chapter 73 . 1/27
Great chapter. Loved all three.
| LadyDaisys chapter 73 . 1/27
I always wondered about the trio's dads myself. That would explain a lot. Great take on the bros!