| Reviews for The First |
|---|
  Guest chapter 33 . 9/14/2018 Hope Grandpa Davidson didn't hear Vinnie say that... |
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/9/2018 I bet her dad must have been proud of his mane, too... |
| Guest chapter 10 . 9/9/2018 why would she know professional massage techniques? |
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/9/2018 Why didn't he just tie it back and let it grow-out sooner? |
 Butterfly souls chapter 10 . 9/8/2018 Lol dying ! |
| Butterfly souls chapter 8 . 9/8/2018 Lol ! |
| Butterfly souls chapter 7 . 9/8/2018 Saw that movie too lol :D love this story . |
| Butterfly souls chapter 5 . 9/8/2018 Lol I love this story! |
| Guest chapter 74 . 9/4/2018 It's not going to be the Martian's 'Freedom Fighters'/'Biker Mice' emblem, is it? Because, that would be un-original, if it was so. ; |
| Guest chapter 70 . 9/4/2018 Which ear is it for an engagement? |
| Guest chapter 49 . 8/7/2018 'Wonder how they'd respond to the acronym, 'SNAFU', too...? LOL! |
| Guest chapter 41 . 8/5/2018 What about other songs from QUEEN, too? 'Princes of the Universe'? 'Flash'? 'Another One Bites the Dust'? 'We Are The Champions'? |
| Guest chapter 69 . 8/5/2018 Yes, Vinnie; look it up! |
| Guest chapter 68 . 8/5/2018 ENCORE! AGAIN! AGAIN! |
| Guest chapter 53 . 8/3/2018 Does Charley ever tell Carbine about any of this...? LOL! |