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   Morning chapter 2 . 5/1/2008 Very cute and very true to life. Gave me a major smile seeing the whole thing take place now I have something new to draw and put up on my sight when and if I ever get my stupid scanner working. That is if you don't mind my using your imagination to fuel mine. Morning |
| Morning chapter 1 . 5/1/2008 I loved this so much. The telling of how Throttle felt about the shower almost brought tears to my eyes. You are an excellent writer and I will be giving your other creations a read when time allows. Thank you so much for sharing your talents. Morning |
| Sewer Slider chapter 1 . 4/19/2008 I've occasionally wondered how the mice reacted to a planet where water is used so wastefully in comparison to their own, so I loved the reactions in this (I still say that the reason Carbine leapt straight into the shower in Seeds Of Victory was because it'd be a great luxury). Especially like the way the water conservation carries over no matter what. And I have to confess having an evil grin on my face envisioning Throttle at the bathroom door... nice work! I'm going to spend the rest of the night wondering about their first encounter with a garden hose XD |
| Mommy Silver chapter 1 . 4/9/2008 Nice funny story, but ehm... if you'll excuse me, I go have a very ice cold shower to cool down right now... |
| kirallie chapter 1 . 4/7/2008 Good work! More? |