...oh, I cracked up laughing so HARD during this one! :D *hugs*

Re. the challenge quotations, just in case my ideas give you some ideas:

1] When the unnamed speaker explains about the benefits of maniacal laughter to Charley, for some reason I imagine that the unnamed speaker is Limburger's latest hired villain-of-the-week, who has kidnapped Charley and is making civilized conversation with her?

2] The one with the pink poofy ballroom gown - I imagined Carbine as wearing the gown and jewelry you described?

3] When Charley apologizes for blowing Vinnie up by accident - I imagined that Vinnie was aboard a Plutarkian spacecraft that Charley shot down, before she found out he was on it?

I hope these help! ;)

Good shooting, that mouse! :D Squirrels - yeesh! They're so sinister...

This is a very cool chapter which fits perfectly with that particular album - thank you for your hard work on it! :) *hugs*

Awww, this is so adorable! :) Vicky, Trey and Memphis are a fantastic bunch - it's a shame about the time differential between dimensions, it would make it very difficult for the lady Mice to visit Charley's universe without missing years in their own dimension.

Wowzer! :) Yeah, I can definitely see the Mice needing a crap-ton of therapy like this after that particular three-parter, and Throttle had it especially bad.

...now I'm wondering about how Carbine felt after that plot arc? I mean, did she plummet into a downward spiral of anger and self-loathing for... well, the same reasons why Throttle is steamed at her in this chapter? And how did she handle that? ...what if Charley helped Carbine the same way whenever Carbine first visits Earth and gets a quiet moment or two?

It'sssss... Monty Python's Flying Circus! :D

...come to think of it, what did the people who work at the gynecologist's office [and the patients] think when Vinnie walked in for his appointment? Is there any chance we could see them during it, or after his departure?

This is inspired! Inspired, I tell you! :D *hugs*

BWA-HA-HA-HA! :D This is hilarious! *hugs*

Awww! This is so adorable! :) *hugs*

My jaw hurts so much from laughing so hard - totally worth it! :D And thank you for using part of your own personal history for Charley's anecdote! *hugs*

...and this is why it pays for goons to be consummate professionals while on the job! :D

Somehow, given the ice cold rage the Mice were in, I'm guessing that Charley would not need to bail them out, on the grounds that they simply would not get caught by the authorities. ;)

...why do I get the feeling that the glowing green rock is Kryptonite? :D

More than one mad scientist in the Davidson family - oh, Rao, this explains soooo frakking much! :D

This is such a hilarious chapter! :) *hugs*

This is such a painful yet beautiful chapter! *hugs* Poor Modo - you really captured the full agonizing scale of his grief in this one.

...also, kudos to you for incorporating part of Chicago's history [i.e. smuggling booze into the States during the 1920s and early -30s] into the Davidson family's history - nice one! :)

You make excellent - and hilarious - points! :)

...you do realize that the reverse is also true, right? Guys reward women for certain behaviors, e.g. with shopping trips or by booking spa days for them? Just saying, it goes both ways... ;)

I am still cackling with laughter while typing this review - that's how hilarious and awesome this chapter is! :D *hugs*