I agree! Writings always look so very much longer in Word! As for your work, I enjoyed it immensly. Your words flow smoothly, making this a joy to read. I hope you continue.

Nicely done one-shot! Your progression of the story is very smooth. And the misunderstanding is pretty funny! I think that it's a great piece the way it is, but I would not object to seeing more. That would be great too!

The taunki's involved. This can only go from bad to worse.

So thanks. I'm so glad that you've decided to continue this fic

Welcome back! I'm waiting for you to update this fiction long long time ago. Thank you very much.

lol! i love the humor! just proves that fancy words don't necessarily make the read enjoyable! do go on! :D

Really funny! :]] Loved it! :]

I love this. It's romantic without getting cheesy. My cup of tea, exactly! :) Please do continue.

I liked it very much please do more

*laughs* this is funny!

Nice turn of events there! I liked it!

The story is already fine as it is, but it you plan on continuing it, then I'll be sure to read it.

Thanks, I had fun.

I enjoyed it :) I liked ur writing style and look forward to reading what you'll come up with next.

I like it so far. Please, continue :)

I like this~ I want to see the finished version! But, I don't see Megumi as the sort that will be hopeless about "the one man"-for some reason I see her being: "Once that man comes to his senses..." you know? CONFIDENCE!

hahaha this is really funny! XD