|Reviews for Bella Sees the Real Edward|
| not done baking chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
Honestly this just wasn't doing it for me... and I think I know why. When I think short I think funny, if it's going to be all serious it's best to just go all out and write pages and pages and pages (and I know you can do that, don't be modest.) But, that's all personal preference so this shouldn't even count as a review more as a "I'm gonna feel guilty if I don't leave a review because I know review count means something" review.
Like always, 55 words exactly is always hard to hit so good job. For 55 words you kept the vocab at a great place.