Reviews for Never Surrender
ObscurusBooks chapter 4 . 9/18
As disturbing as this may sound but I really, really love this chapter. In fact, I love all four of them. The idea of describing how their lifes could have been ten or eleven years later is amazing.
Although I have to admit that I'm not sure if Klaus would ever let himself go to this extent.
But it's your story and I really enjoyed it!
anonymous chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
anonymous chapter 4 . 7/14/2012
This story is very interesting. It is sad that you aren't going to continue it. Why not try again? It's been 4 years and you might have some ideas.
armybrat0987 chapter 4 . 7/25/2011
wow...scarily enjoyable... keep writing, I feel disturbed...

(shudder) Suicide does sound better, i do wonder what they're daughter looks like... oh well it's legal...shit i feel violated...(shudders harder)

thanks for the story i have been looking for for quiet some time...thanks...

hugs,and whispered kisses...

Alexxis T. Swan chapter 4 . 4/14/2011
I LOVED it! It was so DARK and realistic! It was what would have happened to Violet anyway. Seems like a easier alternative compared to what they went through in the rest of the books. I'm not surprised she didn't beg him. She's a smart girl, she must have known in would be in vain. Great fic! You should write more like this!

Yours sincerely,

~Alexxis T. Swan
anonymous chapter 4 . 9/5/2009
This is good, but it's also very sad, because there's no hope in it. I liked reading the first few chapters and the fic is overall well written, but it's quite depressing beside that. I realize it's not a happy book series, so why should the fic be happy, but... the Olaf chapter was a little much in the way of tragedy, even for the series this is based on.

I like the writing! Keep at it! Maybe you could do a Lemony chapter.
apikale-wahine chapter 4 . 5/22/2008
Hm... I'm pretty sure rape, even within the context of marriage, is pretty much illegal everywhere; however, I doubt Count Olaf would know that.

Still, I'm in suspense...

I like your portrayal of Sunny.
Capricieux chapter 4 . 5/11/2008
neko-chan chapter 4 . 5/8/2008
awsome story!

update please!
Permanent Rose chapter 4 . 5/7/2008
I like your writing style. Please update soon
Violet S. Rose chapter 4 . 5/5/2008

that was a really good chapter. ]

i loved seeing more from you.

you really are a very talented writer.

it was really good. ha

cant wait to see more :

update soon please !

maybe with chapters not from a certain characters point of view, like an overall mixed chapter of different things happening.

just a thought. ]

i liked the action and creepiness vibe of this chapter.

good job !
KatZen FF. NET won't log in chapter 4 . 5/2/2008
Guess what's on Channel Ten at 6.30pm on Saturday? *Very Happy Now*

Anyway, coz it's a weekend, i can't bug you in person, so...

UPDATE, DARN IT, UPDATE! It's been ages and i really want to read another chapter!


Neo *Sharpens axe, so that Neo can attack you if you don't update soon!*
KatZen chapter 4 . 4/27/2008
Whoa! *blinks rapidly*

that was... interesting, to say the least.

Olaf is mentally deranged- he should seek psychological(SP?) help in this chapter, BUT, it fits his charater, so maybe he shouldn't.

made the last day of skzlz hols gr8!

just some incentive to get you updating- if you don't i'll keep on bugging you throughout common classes. the previous statement is not a threat, just incentive. *evil grin*

Illiobillium chapter 4 . 4/27/2008
*giggles* Yus! Another update! And an almost NC-17 one at that. *wiggles eyebrows* And you know that that means I'm now insanely happy.
Lils chapter 4 . 4/27/2008
Great chapter! I love the way you've written Olaf. He's very disturbed, but it works really well. Keep up the great work!
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