|Reviews for Revelations|
| thechamelioncircuit chapter 31 . 1/27/2013
I will read on! Fantastic job! As good as the show itself if not better. Molto benne!
| anemix chapter 31 . 10/23/2010
This was a great story, though I wonder what happened to the Wardens who were holding the Doctor. I hope that's discussed in the sequel. I especially liked how you tie all of the stories together with cause and effect. Keep writing!
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| MentalMeander chapter 31 . 4/1/2010
I've been messaging you for so long, that I've never really gotten round to actually reviewing. But I figured this one deserved one, so here it is!
I can definitely see what you meant by "hitting your stride" (I think that's how you put it :S) in this fic. I loved how you wrote Rose in this, but like your other stories, wha I really like is where you're going with the Doctor and Jack's relationship. Their friendship is such a great one, and I don't think it's done half as much as should :(
But you write them beautifully, and this was wonderful! Can't wait to read Vengeance next!
| teddybowties chapter 31 . 5/23/2009
what cna I say? this was so goo,d ,just liek the other...three, I think. heh. Im so good. You...are...,ohgoddessofthetimeywimey?pwettypweeze?
| teddybowties chapter 24 . 5/23/2009
DAMN it. i swore Id never forget what FUBAR meant. wht is it, uh
Fucks up bad and ?
| reddwarfaddict chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
Hmm, wanna know something really funny? (Well, it's funny to ME...)
My friends just gave me a link to a fic on Teaspoon called "Revelations" by Mister Turnipseed. It seemed familiar, but also brilliant, so I kept reading, hooked. After a while I thought, "yeah - I've DEFINATELY read this before! But WHERE?" and after reading a little more, curiosity became too much and I checked out the profile of Mister Turnipseed. It said, "I post my stories under other pen names at other sites." Hmm. Didn't really help!
Then I thought... wait... Laura Harkness? So I ran to your profile on and there it was! Revelations! So I thought, okay, this story deserves a review! So here it is. Bravo! Congratulations! Fantastic! Awesomundo! I think I'll be going ona reading spam of your stuff now... *adds to C2*
| Chocky chapter 31 . 4/18/2008
Oh no the story is over... Part of me wishes it was longer. Really made my day reading it.
But I don't think it could have been. The Doctor is the Doctor, he has been through a lot worst that this before.
Secretly hoping there is more adventures with Wil?
| reddwarfaddict chapter 31 . 4/17/2008
Oh bravo! *Clap clap clap* Thoroghly enjoyable, so enjoyable that I didn't even spell thoroughly right! Ta da! *Hugs the Doctor* Aw, poor Doccy. WHY do I keep calling him 'Doccy'? Okay, I'll shutup now.
| reddwarfaddict chapter 26 . 4/16/2008
YES! Go Jack! *Punches air* Go Jack! More, MORE!
| Chocky chapter 18 . 4/15/2008
Really enjoying the story. Loking forward to the next chapters.
Can't wait to see the dynamic between Wil and Jack.
| the-writer1988 chapter 14 . 4/12/2008
This is very intriguing! I wonder who exactly has the Doctor...and if Jack and Rose will be able to find him before anything bad happens.
Keep up the good work and update soon!
| reddwarfaddict chapter 14 . 4/12/2008
Yes I'm still here, and I'm loving it! What're you doing to the poor Doctor? This is mean! Okay, so I'm not really one to talk, but I wanna know what's going on! "Child's cry"? What ARE you doing? AGH! *Runs around screaming*
| Midnight-Shadow18450 chapter 11 . 4/11/2008
AW! Poor Doctor! Please update soon! This is a great story so far.
| the-writer1988 chapter 9 . 4/10/2008
This is very interesting...really looking forward to more!
| RandomCheeses chapter 6 . 4/9/2008
A home base eh? (You mean earth right?) Oh! I can barely wait to read what happens next!
Ten likes baseball does he? Hmm... then again I can definitely see him running madly to home base. He does have a lot of practice at running no?