|Reviews for My Darling Dear|
| AliesB chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
Nice done with the many rhymewords!
I rewrited My Friends for my ST fanfiction. But the song isn't online yet ;)
Anyway, you said you weren't a poet. I don't think so! You are a poet!
Hope to see more poems and stories!
| andaere chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
I actually quite like this. We're learning about poetry in school right now (yeah, yeah, laugh all you want) and this poem has a very nice rhyme scheme (sp?) and meter. I also love the repetition of the like "my darling dear". You do NOT suck at poetry! It created a nice mental image in my head and the words were soothing... If that makes sense... Anyways, good job! )
| JellybeanPie chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
You're reviewed a couple of my pieces, so I looked up some of yours and this poem is amazing! I love the imagery and the rhyme of it. It's so clever and creepy and very much in character and it's so hard to find Sweeney written in character. Good job!
| Stupidbutts chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
i don't know why you said this poem is going to be bad. it actually pretty good.
| friska-freak chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
i love it! very in character and plus, i dont see why you call it boring, and its NOT cliched! its beautiful (and creepy like i said before)!