Reviews for My Darling Dear
AliesB chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
Nice poem!

Nice done with the many rhymewords!

I rewrited My Friends for my ST fanfiction. But the song isn't online yet ;)

Anyway, you said you weren't a poet. I don't think so! You are a poet!

Hope to see more poems and stories!

x Alies
andaere chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
I actually quite like this. We're learning about poetry in school right now (yeah, yeah, laugh all you want) and this poem has a very nice rhyme scheme (sp?) and meter. I also love the repetition of the like "my darling dear". You do NOT suck at poetry! It created a nice mental image in my head and the words were soothing... If that makes sense... Anyways, good job! )
JellybeanPie chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
You're reviewed a couple of my pieces, so I looked up some of yours and this poem is amazing! I love the imagery and the rhyme of it. It's so clever and creepy and very much in character and it's so hard to find Sweeney written in character. Good job!
Stupidbutts chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
i don't know why you said this poem is going to be bad. it actually pretty good.
friska-freak chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
*shudders* creepy...

i love it! very in character and plus, i dont see why you call it boring, and its NOT cliched! its beautiful (and creepy like i said before)!