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CLUSTER LULZBOMB chapter 5 . 5/20/2013 Just out of curiosity - where were you commuting to while writing Chapter 4 on your iPhone? A cum-tasting convention? Your fics suck because chicks can't write good sci-fi. You maintain a homosexual ass-slave relationship with Fictioneer. I hate your fanfiction because I know you from your high school, I know where you live, and I'm coming to have sweet, sweet SEXINGS!1 with you. You are an necrophiliac pedophile abominations, and you obsession with loli zombie Konata proves it. Lucky Star is a show for MALE otakus, NOT FEMALE. GET OUT. There is absolutely NO scientific basis for anything in your fics. Kanata is FUCKING DEAD, feeding the worms, pushing up daisies. Stop it. You need to BE A MAN or at least GET/STEAL IDEAS FROM A MAN in order to write well. I am Asian, you are not. Your arguments are therefore rendered invalid. Grandma always said, women need to get out of the workplace and back to the kitchen! And I tend to agree with her. Because Grandma is right. And Asian. And therefore DOUBLE RIGHT. But, you know, there's still time to erase this stain of diarrhea from the rap-sheet that is your life. Tabula Rasa, so to speak. All you have to do is STOP POSTING this awful disgusting necro-pedophiliac unborn insanity you loosely call "literature". DON'T LET CARPING TROLLS GET YOU DOWN!111 |
CLUSTER LULZBOMB chapter 4 . 5/20/2013 How DARE YOU besmirch the memory of Saddam Hussein and the Predator movies by including them in this shit-fest? Your fics suck because chicks can't write good sci-fi. You maintain a homosexual ass-slave relationship with Fictioneer. I hate your fanfiction because I know you from your high school, I know where you live, and I'm coming to have sweet, sweet SEXINGS!1 with you. You are an necrophiliac pedophile abomination, and you obsession with loli zombie Konata proves it. Lucky Star is a show for MALE otakus, NOT FEMALE. GET OUT. There is absolutely NO scientific basis for anything in your fics. Kanata is FUCKING DEAD, feeding the worms, pushing up daisies. Stop it. You need to BE A MAN or at least GET/STEAL IDEAS FROM A MAN in order to write well. I am Asian, you are not. Your arguments are therefore rendered invalid. Grandma always said, women need to get out of the workplace and back to the kitchen! And I tend to agree with her. Because Grandma is right. And Asian. And therefore DOUBLE RIGHT. But, you know, there's still time to erase this stain of diarrhea from the rap-sheet that is your life. Tabula Rasa, so to speak. All you have to do is STOP POSTING this awful disgusting necro-pedophiliac unborn insanity you loosely call "literature". DON'T LET CARPING TROLLS GET YOU DOWN!111 |
CLUSTER LULZBOMB chapter 3 . 5/20/2013 Kagami sighed. "Why do I suddenly feel nauseous all over again, Obi-wan?" Maybe because you're in an awful fanfic, my dear. Your fics suck because chicks can't write good sci-fi. You maintain a homosexual ass-slave relationship with Fictioneer. I hate your fanfiction because I know you from your high school, I know where you live, and I'm coming to have sweet, sweet SEXINGS!1 with you. You are an necrophiliac pedophile abominations, and you obsession with loli zombie Konata proves it. Lucky Star is a show for MALE otakus, NOT FEMALE. GET OUT. There is absolutely NO scientific basis for anything in your fics. Kanata is FUCKING DEAD, feeding the worms, pushing up daisies. Stop it. You need to BE A MAN or at least GET/STEAL IDEAS FROM A MAN in order to write well. I am Asian, you are not. Your arguments are therefore rendered invalid. Grandma always said, women need to get out of the workplace and back to the kitchen! And I tend to agree with her. Because Grandma is right. And Asian. And therefore DOUBLE RIGHT. But, you know, there's still time to erase this stain of diarrhea from the rap-sheet that is your life. Tabula Rasa, so to speak. All you have to do is STOP POSTING this awful disgusting necro-pedophiliac unborn insanity you loosely call "literature". DON'T LET CARPING TROLLS GET YOU DOWN!111 |
CLUSTER LULZBOMB chapter 2 . 5/20/2013 Prof. Farnsworth: "ANY review, you say?" Your fics suck because chicks can't write good sci-fi. You maintain a homosexual ass-slave relationship with Fictioneer. I hate your fanfiction because I know you from your high school, I know where you live, and I'm coming to have sweet, sweet SEXINGS!1 with you. You are an necrophiliac pedophile abominations, and you obsession with loli zombie Konata proves it. Lucky Star is a show for MALE otakus, NOT FEMALE. GET OUT. There is absolutely NO scientific basis for anything in your fics. Kanata is FUCKING DEAD, feeding the worms, pushing up daisies. Stop it. You need to BE A MAN or at least GET/STEAL IDEAS FROM A MAN in order to write well. I am Asian, you are not. Your arguments are therefore rendered invalid. Grandma always said, women need to get out of the workplace and back to the kitchen! And I tend to agree with her. Because Grandma is right. And Asian. And therefore DOUBLE RIGHT. But, you know, there's still time to erase this stain of diarrhea from the rap-sheet that is your life. Tabula Rasa, so to speak. All you have to do is STOP POSTING this awful disgusting necro-pedophiliac unborn insanity you loosely call "literature". DON'T LET CARPING TROLLS GET YOU DOWN!111 |
CLUSTER LULZBOMB chapter 1 . 5/20/2013 Your fics suck because chicks can't write good sci-fi. You maintain a homosexual ass-slave relationship with Fictioneer. I hate your fanfiction because I know you from your high school, I know where you live, and I'm coming to have sweet, sweet SEXINGS!1 with you. You are an necrophiliac pedophile abominations, and you obsession with loli zombie Konata proves it. Lucky Star is a show for MALE otakus, NOT FEMALE. GET OUT. There is absolutely NO scientific basis for anything in your fics. Kanata is FUCKING DEAD, feeding the worms, pushing up daisies. Stop it. You need to BE A MAN or at least GET/STEAL IDEAS FROM A MAN in order to write well. I am Asian, you are not. Your arguments are therefore rendered invalid. Grandma always said, women need to get out of the workplace and back to the kitchen! And I tend to agree with her. Because Grandma is right. And Asian. And therefore DOUBLE RIGHT. But, you know, there's still time to erase this stain of diarrhea from the rap-sheet that is your life. Tabula Rasa, so to speak. All you have to do is STOP POSTING this awful disgusting necro-pedophiliac unborn insanity you loosely call "literature". Foreword? Moar like foreskin amirite? DON'T LET CARPING TROLLS GET YOU DOWN!111 |
Mike chapter 5 . 1/19/2009 Wow I loved your story! That was just awesome! I loved how you made a sci fi out of Lucky Star but really kept everything like the show, just how I'd expect it! Thanks for writing a great story! |
Johannes Krauser II chapter 1 . 12/20/2008 RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE! |
Fictioneer - RE-POST chapter 1 . 12/7/2008 Please post your story reviews and feedback at _ ?userid683012 or Dee Eon's Fanfiction bio profile page to get re-posted here later. RE-POST FROM FICTIONEER I'd rather post things about this story itself, really. But you can't ignore a party crasher who won't go away even outside FanFiction, and it affects way more than just one writer here. To "Kagamin/The New York Time Out/KeRose/Wild Growlithe" and whoever you'll morph into next week: I had to damp down a lot of words to get this reposted. Too bad Dee's got too much grace being a real lady to wrestle in your slimehole. BTW I asked Dee if I can do a short VAA part in one of her radioplays so you'll be able to hear how good a fake male persona of Dee's I am. Wish I could see your mug when that happens. No joke, you are a very sick person. I don't know how in hell Dee got so deep under your skin that you've been chasing and piling shit on her name and stories even away from Fan Fiction com. That's not being a "critic". That's being crazed. A real critic drops their opinion and walks away. Instead you've been on Dee's back like a chigger all over the web. Your bogus nit-picking "critiques" is just a cover for slinging spite and envy (though I won't hold that against you since Dee's a looker too). Even Raki-Suta had to delete whole threads to kick your rants out. (No one there likes you - get it?) If Dee made humoguous story bloopers I'd call her on the carpet myself and she's skimmed a few mistakes, but she's also learned what P.T. Barnum did long ago but you haven't; thrill and entertain your audience, don't lecture them grammar and syntax. Star Wars and Terminator were shot through with all kinds of gross errors, but they didn't let that get in the way of excitement and laughs. The proof is Dee's stories are popular and you're not. Also much of what you say is warped quibbling and misinterpretations of what she wrote. You'd have to be living in a pretty "closed community" not to know that there's lots of regular people who'd act like she described. If not real life, even try watching a few soap operas for an idea. Being a dime-a-dozen psyche major doesn't make you any shrink. You're obviously not going to be happy till you've run Dee off the web or made her twist her stories YOUR way, so nothing anyone could say is going to give Dee any relief from you. The fact that you say people must tolerate abuse to use the web is totally insane. Try that one on blacks and Jews and minorities. It shows you're full of one-track hate for this woman. The worst part of it is that FanFiction is infested with low-lifes like you who need underlings to bash and get your jollies off intimidating new and beginner writers on FF and mashing their self-esteem and postings with lame intellectual "suggestions" of how to do things _your_ way. Or else suffer Dee's fate. And it works because few new writers stay in FanFiction long. That's the scariest part about you. Sounds a hell of lot like Thought Nazis. I've nothing more to say to you anymore. I, like busy Dee, have far better normal things to do. Fictioneer |
The New York Time Out chapter 2 . 12/6/2008 Poor Dee. You still think that we're all the same person? No, no. We're not. That long review by the bisexual woman? That wasn't me. Neither were the crapton of others you've gotten lately. Facts: 1. I don't "live to put others down". You tell yourself that so that you can feel better about being so bothered by this stuff, and so that you can feign "pity" for me. Leaving comments on your page takes a few minutes out of my time. My life is devoted to many more things than you or your iphone could likely fathom. 2. You can say that profanity won't be tolerated, but people will curse in reviews whether you like it or not. It hasn't stopped your friends from being profane either. "Stick a nice thick firehose in your over starched panties", implying that I should painfully penetrate myself with a hose, is a nice example. You seem quite tolerant of profanity in that case. 3. FFnet will not grant you such a feature because you complain and ask for one. People have been whining at them over this kind of thing since the site opened, and they haven't done a thing about it. If that sort of feature existed, no one would be able to leave a single bad review on a single story here, and this site would become a place where bad writers go to have their egos stroked, and nothing more. Maybe you need to learn to take criticism instead of waiting for the administrators to baby you through your writing experience by allowing you to "filter" out every bad review you ever get. Don't they warn you before joining that not every review you get will be a good one, and you need to learn to deal with it? 4. On that topic, I'd like to point out your hypocrisy. You begged for flames a while back, remember? "I can take the heat!" I believe, were your words. So you got them. Once you got them, you couldn't handle them - nor could you handle anyone saying anything that was not praise for your story. I saw people being perfectly civil to you, but telling you that your fic had serious flaws. Like Silenced Shadow? Or that woman who reviewed your incest fic? You dismissed them all as trolls and sicked your friends on them. I'm harsh and I'm mean, but I did read your fics and I let you know exactly what I thought of them. That is not against the rules. The way that your friends have been personally insulting the lives of your critics could just as much count as the "harassment" you so vehemently claim to be a victim of. People on the internet who get picked on usually make a show of themselves first. People have reached out to you and given you suggestions on how to improve both as an author and on internet conduct, and you've totally ignored them - and even insulted them. You delete all bad reviews, whether they're mean to you or not. If you can't take criticism, don't be a part of the creative world. If you can't take people being mean to you, don't use the internet. It's that simple. No Love, NYTO - only one person |
Dee ChakiChakiGirl Eon chapter 1 . 12/6/2008 Please post your feedback and reviews at _ ?userid683012 or if this gets filtered out, just drop a message off at my Fanfiction profile page for me to re-post your review here later. This inconvenience has been brought to you by troll and topic harasser "Kagamin/The New York Time Out/KeRose/Wild Growlithe" (and whatever other monikers I will post in the future). This pernicious person has thrilled to making a pest of herself by maligning my name and feedback at many internet sites. This is not in response to over-the-top carping critiques, but outright malicious and spiteful spamming, and I won't tolerate any expletives and profane words to be posted on my reviews. Please bear with me until Fanfiction institutes a sensible "suspend all new reviews to filter later" feature. Thank you and I regret the inconvenience. Dee Eon |
ChakiChakiGirl chapter 1 . 12/6/2008 Please post your feedback and reviews at _ ?userid683012 or if this gets filtered out, just drop a message off at my Fanfiction profile page for me to re-post your review here later. This inconvenience has been brought to you by troll and topic harasser "Kagamin/The New York Time Out/KeRose/Wild Growlithe" (and whatever other monikers I will post in the future). This pernicious person has thrilled to making a pest of herself by maligning my name and feedback at many internet sites. This is not in response to over-the-top carping critiques, but outright malicious and spiteful spamming, and I won't tolerate any expletives and profane words to be posted on my reviews. Please bear with me until Fanfiction institutes a sensible "suspend all new reviews to filter later" feature. Thank you and I regret the inconvenience. Dee Eon |
Dee ChakiChakiGirl Eon chapter 1 . 11/9/2008 Hi! Sorry I haven't dropped by here earlier. The news I have is: Yes, there WILL be a Chapter Six, but not in a while - due that, to my great pleasure and gratitude, Emerald Park Productions is doing a full fansub of "Miyuki's Spaced-Out Secret", and later of "Kanata Thawed." So hopefully the fansub will tie you over till chapter six is done shortly after the last fandub episode is aired. :) Also, "The Yamato Effect" is going to to be largely re-written so it not longer (coincidentally) resembles some very popular animes and will strike out on a whole new novel path. If you have questions don't hesitate to write me via the message link on my FanFiction profile page! Take care! Dee |
konatafan8765437 chapter 5 . 10/27/2008 brilliant story overall never expected the whole giant bug thing. good twist. any chance of a new chapter soon? keep it up and looking forward to the next chapter! |
Darwise chapter 5 . 10/16/2008 Just wondering if you ever plan on updating this story? I had honestly hoped you would have more traffic now; it's a shame, cause your stories are really enjoyable. I'm sure it can be frustrating when you have hits, and nobody bothers to review your stories,(I feel bad about waiting so long to do so) but personally I think most reviewers just don't want to say the same thing somebody else said, so they end up not reviewing, even if they think your story's good. Whatever you decide is your choice, but I would be pretty happy if you continued this. Oh! and I'd like to join that mailing... list... thing. If possible. |
Kagami no Renkinjutsushi chapter 6 . 8/19/2008 I want to join your mailing list: As for the story, i really enjoyed reading it. I couldn't stop laughing. |