Reviews for Take My Hand
Not Enough Answers chapter 17 . 4/26
This is a beautiful story and was a true pleasure to read. Thank you for writing it.
Danaren Reid chapter 17 . 3/2
interesting au story, Mara is my fav character , i liked the way she changed after meeting Luke early , even if she was sent as a spy , she fell quickly for him.
And about her being pregnant early , i think that she will have a girl .
Mysts of Time chapter 17 . 1/3
A nice little break from my incursion into the heart of Harry Potter fanfictions.
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 16 . 4/13/2016
Oooh very good taunt from Luke about Leia, and how the revelation may have affected Vader's turnabout
Appreciate Vader's thoughts about what would have happened if Padme had not died then, something I have not seen before, and great pre-mortem one-liner. Also very good to have Vader outline why his relationship led to the Dark Side
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 15 . 4/12/2016
Good description of Palpatine's appearance and the affect, and also the insight into his fear
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 14 . 4/8/2016
Surprisingly interesting conversation, really started getting intense when Vader heard Mara was to kill Luke
Ooh, never thought of the idea of Vader's reaction to almost killing Luke. Also liked his thoughts on Mara and being a Sith
Very emotional conversation between Luke and Mara
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 13 . 4/7/2016
I seriously appreciate Luke's thoughts here, emphasizing why he has to leave the others (and be a distraction), and why he thinks that Vader can be saved. Necessary
Nice touch that Leia's diplomatic backing would be right in line with the Jedi code, something that tends to be overlooked
Wow, real conflicted conversation with Mara. Was almost sure she would stay with Solo and Co.
Good expanded talk with Vader
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 12 . 4/5/2016
Appreciate how you have Han accepting that not all of his soldiers will obey him given his history
Interesting plan of Mara's, looking forward to seeing how it actually plays out
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 11 . 3/23/2016
Good conversation with Han and Luke, showing their development and friendship
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 10 . 3/22/2016
Really like your point that Ben was not remorseful at all about how Luke felt over the 'certain point of view.' Good interchange in the conversation between mentors
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 9 . 3/22/2016
Never really thought that the fact that Luke was never told much about the old Jedi was to deliberately force him to develop the New Order, good insight
Good conversation between Mara and Yoda, especially when he gets shows his authority
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 8 . 3/20/2016
Good points here on how Luke's old life would have been torn inside out
LOL that they go from the romantic tension to constant fighting all before The Kiss. Good too from a literary perspective, more believable
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 5 . 3/16/2016
Like how you examine her relationship with the Emperor here, something that did not happen too much in the EU as memory goes
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 4 . 3/14/2016
Mother nature can throw off the best plans
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 3 . 3/13/2016
Interesting idea that an execution pit in the desert was actually safer, and good point that Leia was not following the plan when she unfroze Han
Nice teaser for when Mara snatched away Luke's lightsaber in his vision in Heir to the Empire
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