|Reviews for Take My Hand|
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 16 . 4/13
Oooh very good taunt from Luke about Leia, and how the revelation may have affected Vader's turnabout
Appreciate Vader's thoughts about what would have happened if Padme had not died then, something I have not seen before, and great pre-mortem one-liner. Also very good to have Vader outline why his relationship led to the Dark Side
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 15 . 4/12
Good description of Palpatine's appearance and the affect, and also the insight into his fear
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 14 . 4/8
Surprisingly interesting conversation, really started getting intense when Vader heard Mara was to kill Luke
Ooh, never thought of the idea of Vader's reaction to almost killing Luke. Also liked his thoughts on Mara and being a Sith
Very emotional conversation between Luke and Mara
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 13 . 4/7
I seriously appreciate Luke's thoughts here, emphasizing why he has to leave the others (and be a distraction), and why he thinks that Vader can be saved. Necessary
Nice touch that Leia's diplomatic backing would be right in line with the Jedi code, something that tends to be overlooked
Wow, real conflicted conversation with Mara. Was almost sure she would stay with Solo and Co.
Good expanded talk with Vader
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 12 . 4/5
Appreciate how you have Han accepting that not all of his soldiers will obey him given his history
Interesting plan of Mara's, looking forward to seeing how it actually plays out
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 11 . 3/23
Good conversation with Han and Luke, showing their development and friendship
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 10 . 3/22
Really like your point that Ben was not remorseful at all about how Luke felt over the 'certain point of view.' Good interchange in the conversation between mentors
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 9 . 3/22
Never really thought that the fact that Luke was never told much about the old Jedi was to deliberately force him to develop the New Order, good insight
Good conversation between Mara and Yoda, especially when he gets shows his authority
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 8 . 3/20
Good points here on how Luke's old life would have been torn inside out
LOL that they go from the romantic tension to constant fighting all before The Kiss. Good too from a literary perspective, more believable
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 5 . 3/16
Like how you examine her relationship with the Emperor here, something that did not happen too much in the EU as memory goes
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 4 . 3/14
Mother nature can throw off the best plans
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 3 . 3/13
Interesting idea that an execution pit in the desert was actually safer, and good point that Leia was not following the plan when she unfroze Han
Nice teaser for when Mara snatched away Luke's lightsaber in his vision in Heir to the Empire
| KarumaAngel chapter 17 . 12/21/2015
this was one of the best romantic fanfics out there
| Chewie Cookies chapter 17 . 11/13/2015
That was freaking BEAUTIFUL! Good stuff!
| MomoT chapter 17 . 8/29/2014
I just finished reading your Story. And since I've resently made the vow, to review more often, I'll just start here.
Your Storry is nicely done. I like the Idee of an AU, where Mara and Luke meet under different cirkunstances. Partly, because I like this Pairing, partly, because it gives the possibility, to change the dynamik of the Couble (thoght you didn't choose that route), and making them just the tad different, that is nessesary, that you can still like the couple after you already read some FFs about it.
The Story is easy to read. It has a confortable pace, no real twist, but a good prepared and executed Highlight and a short, but good aftermath.
Because I'm no native Englisch speaker (though you might have guessed already), I can't say much about misspelling. I didn't find anything, which I made a worse reading experience.
The Vocabulary was within my Abillities, though I'd like to think, that I'm quite skilled at reading Englisch at this point.
Right now, I can't come up with something to praise or criticise, so I'll stopp my Review here.
I will probaly write you another review, since you have some other nice storrys.
That in mind;