|Reviews for Decisions|
| Fabi Washu chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
I completely agree with the way you portray Riza and her thoughts about her situations as a child and her grew up, and her relation with Roy in all this times. The way you did her talk about Roy actions and wishes was very well too. And the end was perfect
I really loved this story and hope you continue to write, especially about them.
| Fightingdreamerx chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
That's a great poem. Brilliant Story- you wrote Hawkeye really well.
| Harpers chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
I'm not certain if I agree entirely with your characterization of Riza. It seemed a little OOC at times -more desperate and clingy than the actual Riza would ever be. Or perhaps, it just shows growth in her as a person from then up until now.
Either way, it's still a solid piece of writing, and I enjoyed reading it.
| Red's 21st chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
I really enjoyed this. It is very nicely written and I adore the ending!
| srdfgchvjboguvjh chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
i love that poem, it was in the front of some book i read once and i've always remembered it. good story, might have been nice to see a LITTLE more of Riza's happiness at marriage, but overall well done.
| Ruingaraf chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
Brilliant, brilliant in-character Riza. Love it. :D
I especially loved how Roy "burned himself and everything in the back yard", it was much more ammusing that it was probably intended to be.
Good work, people seem to have a hard time writing Hawkeye, but you nailed it.