Reviews for LONG LOST
The-Strange-Case-Of chapter 4 . 12/27/2013
Still no beta? I'd say I'd beta for you but I have no ideas whatsoever. So all I can say is post soon!
bffalwlt chapter 4 . 10/8/2010

Some ideas:

-Bella somehow had a baby?

-Another sibling changed with Bella?

-Rose and Bella become best friends?

-Bella has a power that allows vamps to have babies makes interesting?

PM me if u need more!
ReadingIsSexy15 chapter 4 . 3/22/2010
Old1Account chapter 4 . 12/23/2009
This is a great story! If you havn't found a beta yet, I would love to take the job!
MarveyTibbsMcGarrettWilliams chapter 4 . 11/28/2009
can i beta?
fanfictioner4 chapter 3 . 10/20/2009
Continue ! I just want that Emmett and Bella spend too much together and Rosalie have to apologize in front of every one :) I dont like to much Rosalie. And then to start to have feelings for Edward
fanfictioner4 chapter 4 . 10/14/2009
Update ! Its great continue !
RealityAnimagus8983 chapter 4 . 7/29/2009
i have a idea but i cant be a beta well bella freaks out when alice is trying to drag her to the car but she yells to emmett to help her aand emmett pulls bella away from alice then edward trys to hug her and emmett growls at him
tat2qt4u14 chapter 4 . 7/25/2009
hey so i've been looking for a story just like this all i love it umm i think maybe you should like have bella and emmett have some flashbacks on what they used to do and have bella turn veggie and maybe have bella and emmett do some pranks but it's just a suggestion i think the way your story is going is really good i love it so ya

- tatiana
VampzRsexy chapter 4 . 6/19/2009
okay well how about bella is a 16 or 15 year old and emmette is realy stricked for his little sister because edward loves her but edward is 1 or 2 years older oh and bella is a bigger prankster then emmy-bear
strawberry chapter 4 . 6/7/2009
ok why not have bella be 15 yrs old cause emmete could be realy protected of bella and care that she and edward are only 2 years away
strawberry chapter 4 . 6/2/2009
edward wants to be with bella but would em. let him and rose gets realy jelouse when bella and em. get to tell them how it was realy realy weired that there parents wanted them to be together oh and bella loves to shop bella is also very very rich
Saucy-Stacey chapter 4 . 5/1/2009
Great story and i love how you have written it. I personally think that you should have like bella get to know the cullens well, maybe fall in love with edward maybe not, and then she like meets someone from her past or she should have a awesome butt kicking power and the voulturi com after her. Dont be scared to do something eccentric :D update soon!
Aussieshipwhore chapter 4 . 4/9/2009
loved it

in my opinion u should have bella with an awesome super cool power and instead of alice being her bestest friend make roasalie have alice as the second bestie!

randomness-4life chapter 4 . 4/4/2009
hey i'll be ur beta reader if u want i know i'm a bit late comming up on the offer but i'll be itif u want
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