|Reviews for Lunière|
| Anne Shirley Cullen chapter 20 . 12/24/2013
I so Love this story so much can't wait till the next installement.
| Josephine Baker chapter 18 . 3/21/2013
Its fun to read the back story surrounding the events we had only seen from Bella's perspective (in the original). Thank you. And thank you for giving Alice respect for earth's creatures and their right to life. It has always bothered me, especially in fanfiction, how little respect the Cullens had for the animals that give their lives so they don't have to murder humans. I don't agree with SM's use of 'vegetarian'.
| Guest chapter 20 . 3/9/2013
WAIT...WHY DID THE MAGIC STOP?
PLEEEEEEEEASE UPDATE !
I LOVED THE FANFIC
| Guest chapter 20 . 7/8/2012
please writ more chapyet they are so excellent
| MouseKitty chapter 20 . 8/30/2010
I've really enjoyed being in Alice's head. I wish there were more chapters.
| Ibly chapter 20 . 8/25/2010
I have been searching for a good view of Alice's POV for awhile and this is the best that i have found. I am very disappointed that it seems to have been abruptly stopped. I would like to see how this story plays out from Alice's POV. Anywho if not please know that it was very entertaining. Thanks
| Liz chapter 20 . 7/22/2010
I love this story - Alice is my favorite too, and it's fantastic to see something so long and well-written about her. Are you going to continue it? I really hope you do, I'd love to see more soon!
| HeatherT chapter 20 . 6/29/2010
I see you haven't updated this in a LONG time. I really hope you haven't given up on it. Its one of the most unique stories I've ever come across. Most of them are all similar but you have taken an incredible twist by telling the story from Alice's POV. I really like it and would LOVE for you to finish it!
| HeatherT chapter 12 . 6/28/2010
Awwww! Thats so damn cute! Gotta love Jasper and Alice. You make them so damn cute together! They almost rival Bella and Edward with their sweetness. This story is so good so far.
| HeatherT chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
I have to say this is refreshing! I'm excited to read it.
| Chellie09 chapter 20 . 4/23/2010
So why, oh why, oh why have you not updated yet? Please do so soon! You're right there at my favorite part, when Bella finds out the truth!
I love Alice's version of Twilight, you've written her so well!And I think you've captured Edward's feelings fore Bella, and his and Alice's relationship perfectly!
The snow war was amazing, and such a great idea! I really like you're little jabs at Jasper's background with the Civil War, and his little story of sibling rivalry was amazing.
I do have a few things to point out though: A) Jasper's Ducati. He doesn't have a vehicle until Edward gets the Ducati in Eclipse (about a year from this point) as an offer to ride with Bella, and then gives it to Jasper instead.
B) Why is Alice seeing visions, clips, of things that haven't even been dicided or a possibility yet? The hotel room, Jasper driving while Alice sits in the back seat of the Mercedes (without Bella yet in the car with them... and why has she seen that before?), the red shirt from Victoria's little mission for Riley. James and his little coven haven't come yet, and he certainly hasn't made the decision to track Bella. She doesn't even know about them being vampires yet (althoguh I'm sure that's coming in the next chapter!). Oh, and Bella alone in the forest, alive yet not. Even with that, it could've happened already if Edward had decided to leave again (only it wouldn't have been as bad). But I do like Alice getting little pieces of her human life, with the southern accent, even if she has no clue where they are coming from.
And I have a theory of her blackouts, since she's having visions of things that haven't been decided yet also. Maybe that has something to do with the wolves in La Push. A little foreshadowing maybe? She's looking at Bella's future, and Bella has a connection to La Push through Charlie and Billy's friendship.
Please, please, please tell me you haven't given up in this story. PLEASE! I can't wait for more!
Oh, and by the way. What are the translations for the French they're speaking through out the story? (can I make a suggestion on that? put the translation in parenthesis after it's spoken so that we who don't understand that language know what's being said) And what was the Spanish conversation? That's understandable not putting the translation there! Lol!
| Livviexox chapter 2 . 1/1/2010
Is lis short for alice? I prefer Ally but this one works and is more original gd job
| shadow32 chapter 20 . 11/7/2009
This story is fascinating. I love reading the stories with alternate POV's and this story was brilliant. I am so anxious to read the next chapters. I hope you update soon.
| The Diamond in the Rocks chapter 20 . 11/2/2009
Wow, your plot fits in exactly with the real story, and it's uber-believable. I love it, and I can so see that happening. Alice is so fun, and her confidence makes me laugh. This fic really makes me love Alice :)
Btw, can I ask for the translation of the Spanish bit here, or do I have to PM you? I'm really curious :P
| PoolTemptress920 chapter 20 . 10/27/2009
I have just found your fic and I think its great! Its so interesting to experience Twilight from another point of view. I think that your story is well written and I enjoy reading from Alice's perspective.
Hope you get the time to write and update soon.