|Reviews for Lunière|
| tnuccio chapter 18 . 12/29/2008
Lovely job Amy! I like what you did with the extra stuff! It's almost like you don't even need me!
| KarenSoul chapter 18 . 12/29/2008
Fantastic. You're very creative with Jasper's past.
| igo3cho chapter 18 . 12/29/2008
Oh, I loved that chapter! I'm so sorry you had a bad week! I know what it's like to have a pet die... I was devastated for weeks. I'm praying for you!
Thank you for the chapter! I love it!
| A Nonny Mouse 23 chapter 18 . 12/29/2008
WOW. that one word pretty much sums up everything about this story. you are brilliant (so brilliant in fact, that I happen to be believe you are either Alice herself, or the great Stephenie Meyer) but seriously, this chapter was amazing [like all the others] and I really enjoyed the added Emmett. He is one of the most over-looked characters and his talk with Alice was really nice. ]
and I'm so sorry about your dog. :'( I know how much it hurts to lose an animal close to you.
Please update soon? I would worship you forever? Please? ]
| feminin chapter 18 . 12/29/2008
This is by far one of the best stories I have read yet. I can't wait to read more!
| emchelle chapter 18 . 12/28/2008
"go straight to the sulk and Sartre"
lol - great line! Yet another wonderful chapter, lots of good development. And I agree with monksmama that it's a relief to have a story that really fleshes out the relationships between each of the Cullens, especially Emmett, who seems to be terminally neglected; I love that he and Alice get to share a moment in this chapter.
So, so sorry to hear about your dog. *HUGS* I hope the new year is better to you.
| smellyia chapter 8 . 12/18/2008
You are a true logophile. All these big words. And really, your imagery is right up there with IGA. But really this "be still my unbeating heart" about ate me alive when I snorted awed laughed and smiled at the same time. Matt does not thank you for that rude wakeup.
| smellyia chapter 7 . 12/18/2008
Ok the Rosalie come-to-Jesus talk Alice rocked was just made of win. But really what I noticed the most was the way you are intermingling Alice's visions with her internal dialog. I see her in a way I never have before.
| smellyia chapter 6 . 12/18/2008
So I just had minisinoo moment with the Gauthier reference. Dude you really do have chaotic brilliant mind!
| monksmama chapter 12 . 12/13/2008
I love your detailed interaction between the cullen siblings. It's so refresing to see that perspective and not just edward, bella, edward, bella. :)
| monksmama chapter 10 . 12/13/2008
The maintenece closet exchange has to be one of my favorites in all of FF.
| monksmama chapter 5 . 12/13/2008
| monksmama chapter 3 . 12/13/2008
I love how well you capture the love between Jasper and Alice.
'Sigh' to be Alice...
| monksmama chapter 1 . 12/13/2008
I originally found your ff through another site. It was the first I'd ever read and therefore didn't appreciate it properly. I can't wait to read it again.
I swear, you must BE Alice. :)Not only the depth of your characterization but the way you really hold on to SM's cannon absolutely blows me away. I could easily believe you are SM herself.
Please, please, please continue this story. It is fantastic and you are truly talented.
I can't wait to explore it again with more 'experienced' eyes!
(and I'm sure I'll have more reviews for you along the way)
| amazing07 chapter 17 . 12/4/2008
I really freaking adore this story. It's so awesome. I can't wait until you update.