|Reviews for Lunière|
| 2boys chapter 15 . 8/10/2008
I'm loving Alice more and more!
| Twilighter4ever chapter 15 . 8/9/2008
Yeah! finally Alice sees what I've waiting for! please update soon!
| The Diamond in the Rocks chapter 15 . 8/9/2008
I have been reading your fic since the start, and I have to say, I love it. It's so well written, and the decription is amazing. I love Alice, and you portray her character very well. Update ASAP, every time I check my email I hurry to see if you've added another chapter to this wonderful tale.
| CellarDoor717 chapter 13 . 8/9/2008
This is a fun chapter, all the strategy, we really get to know the family even more, and Alice's character feels more free-spirited. I like it a lot.
| CellarDoor717 chapter 12 . 8/9/2008
Wow. this may be my favorite chapter. Maybe it's because when Jasper says "so much sadness for someone with such beautiful things" I just LOVE that line! so full of feeling, yet kind of funny, really caring, and also sexy. the ending to this story was so good!
| CellarDoor717 chapter 11 . 8/9/2008
O, he so loves her. Of course we know that, and so does Alice, but still.
In this chapter the French was much easier to get, hahaha. I'm Texan so I'm Spanish fluent. But French, not so much. in this chapter you gave nice commentary on what was being said, great job!
| CellarDoor717 chapter 10 . 8/9/2008
ooh, when she said "especially when we're packing our stuff" that must've hurt big time.
The only suggestion I have is that Alice's character is a little less bubbly than normal and a little more serious and "matter of fact" I guess I would say. Compared to Rosalie I've always thought she was the happier one, but maybe Bella brings that out in her and this is a side of Alice we don't see as often.
| orangemice311 chapter 15 . 8/9/2008
I loved this chapter! :)
| PurdueLiz chapter 15 . 8/9/2008
Oh my goodness, another simply amazing chapter.
| CellarDoor717 chapter 8 . 8/9/2008
haha, that was a very lighthearted chapter, good to up the mood and add some humor
The moon dimly filtered through the gaps in the thick cloud cover only to be swallowed by the boughs of the ancient cedars sThey were the picture of love and devotion. My throat tightened as I wondered if Jasper and I projected the same perfect image to the others.
“You do Alice,” He whispered softly, “The only time I think I might be missing out on something is when I see you both together. Your thoughts mirror each other’s. He would die without you and you without him. I hear it.”
That was my favorite line, I absolutely LOVED it.
| CellarDoor717 chapter 7 . 8/9/2008
I like how Emmett calms Rose down, that made me laugh.
I like Emmetts character in this. it is written so much better than in most fics. I hate when people make him into a complete idiot, it's so annoying.
I like how Alice with her power holds the family together the most during Edward's frustration. And I like how they're the closest siblings so she stays by his side.
| CellarDoor717 chapter 6 . 8/9/2008
Good chapter, we get some "heart to heart" stuff. I just wanted to say that I love Jasper's character, (Alice's distraction) we pretty much never see him in Twilight because he avoids Bella so much, and I love how open and joking he is when you write about him.
| CellarDoor717 chapter 5 . 8/9/2008
Aw, I love how Rosalie missed Edward. They have an interesting sibling relationship because she cares for him so much, but disagrees with him and is infuriated by him on many counts. They're so different, but were the first siblings of the Cullens. Anyways, very good chapter, I love the family dynamics.
| CellarDoor717 chapter 4 . 8/9/2008
Oh, I like this. It's kind of a weird feeling. I keep thinking that while I was reading Twilight, Alice was there spying on Bella, but I didn't know it at the time.
Jasper and Alice are so sweet, I love the way you write their relationship, we just don't see enough of it in the actual books.
I agree, you can have moody old Edward! I just love Alice, and I'd take Jasper too, Mr. Southern Gentleman.
| CellarDoor717 chapter 3 . 8/9/2008
I love this! it's so interesting because reading this, it's like you know everything going on behind the scenes. haha, Bella was so clueless. The butterfly metaphor was very nice.