|Reviews for Lunière|
| brunettelamb chapter 13 . 4/9/2009
lol catch the alice!
this is very good...both touching and hilarious
keep on writing!
| yellowipod chapter 16 . 3/25/2009
This is my favorite chapter in all of the Twilight Fanfiction I have read.
| PreferBrunettes chapter 17 . 3/20/2009
"She was mine as well as his; he couldn’t deny me her company forever. I argued with Edward about her often, but always out of earshot of the rest of the family. Just tell them she’ll be one of us. They would understand. I need her, Edward." i got teary eyed by this, that there is something missing for Alice and only Bella can fill that. So much love in that sentiment. As if I didn't love Alice enough as it is.
I love the way Edward is with her, especialy when he calls her "wee one", but his stubborness is irritating.
It's my pleasure to leave reviews - you put so much time and effort in what you write that it inspires me go on and on and that's true for your "band of writing buddies" too. There's so much here than just a story, you've built their whole lives and it doesn't just revolve around the human - there's humor and anger and family - you make them real and not just a backdrop. and I'm blushing that a review from me means that much, thank you! (btw, i hope you've been getting my reviews because this website has been eating some of the ones i've submitted)
| yellowipod chapter 14 . 3/20/2009
"I heard myself gasp as corpse Bella opened her ruby-red eyes and smiled." I'm very curious to how the hell Alice keeps that one out of her thoughts, or if she even tries to?
Just wondering, are you anticipating the release of Midnight Sun?
"His mind worked only to analyze and rationalize. Love was neither of those things." This statement further proves that Alice knows Edward better than any of us could have guessed..
| yellowipod chapter 13 . 3/20/2009
I LOVE CULLEN FAMILY BONDING!
And snow wars! This is great!
"I didn’t want to wait until the vision fulfilled itself. I skipped upstairs to Jasper, beautiful clothing, and a perfect morning."
For some reason, I'm thinking Alice is being mislead.
On to the next chapter!
| yellowipod chapter 11 . 3/16/2009
Earlier you mentioned a scene where Alice had a vision and Jasper leaned into her to keep her upright.. & Now in French class.. I never realized how hard it must be for her to explain away these moments. You give a lot of insight into how the Cullens try to fit into the human world.
"How much trouble can one little human girl get into anyways?" I laughed out loud at this.
"The song drifting from the open lid crescendos, breathtakingly sweet and soothing." The lullaby.
Even though the plot is already known, I'm still anxious..
| yellowipod chapter 9 . 3/14/2009
I'm wondering what sort of epic snow fight will happen this evening.. Cullen family time is quite picturesque.
& poor Alice and Jasper can't get no, satisfaction..
| yellowipod chapter 7 . 3/14/2009
I empathize with Alice, trying not to react before other's actions.
"I’m just a chump for your pretty face." :)
| yellowipod chapter 6 . 3/14/2009
Their kinship is touching :)
| yellowipod chapter 4 . 3/14/2009
It's really odd to think about how much of the story we don't get when it's told in Bella's POV. Like how we would assume Alice knew Bella was Edward's singer..
Thanks for sharing your insight on the story, and for providing a real depth to Alice.
| yellowipod chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
I've never read an Alice POV that wasn't about E&B, shopping, or a lemon. I am suprised and intrigued. :)
| missCHELS chapter 15 . 3/11/2009
holy wow this is getting good! :P
i STILL love alice :)
| missCHELS chapter 14 . 3/11/2009
yes i love ALICE! :)
| Zico chapter 19 . 3/9/2009
This is awesome - fantastically written, well thought out and delivered. The layers you have added to the characters feels really right. I love it and so look forward to the rest of this. Thanks for sharing
| pricipessa chapter 19 . 3/8/2009
Please write more! You truly do write as though you have the ability to jump into sm's literary voice.