I was happy to find a Mary Bryant fanfic and even moreso one that is very well written.

A Mary Bryant story! I swear, there is only one of these on the entire internet. And this was amazing, seriously. So sad, but very real. Thanks so much

Thanks for the beautiful story. Jack Davenport brings every character he plays to radiant life, and you perfectly captured the flaws and the vulnerabilities of the angsty Lieutenant. I especially liked the way you took the time to work out the torturous process of forgiveness and reconciliation between Ralph and Mary. Lovely.

Beautiful.

Yes! Finally, a Mary Bryant fanfic! This story was absolutely excellent beyond belief. You captured every aspect of the heart and soul of these characters very successfully and added an interesting plot to go along with it. Well done!

Can it be? An actual Mary Bryant fic? They're so hard to find :D I'm so glad Cucumbucaneer sent me over here; Ralph deserved her :D

*pumps fist in air* WOO!

That's it, I've squealed my roof off, now I have to fix it. Once I finish I expect more ;)

Hah. Nah. Thankyou for reading my story by the way.

OK. I'm done here :D

Aw! Yay! They admited their love and have children! I loved this chapter!

Please update soon!

That's so sad about the children! Poor Mary and Clark. But, I loved the end of the chapter! They forgave each other! Yay!

Please update soon!

Ah.

I. Love. It.

Period. :D

Yes! Finally! A Mary Briant story with a lot of Clark! I have read all six chapters, and I must say, bravo! Please keep this up!

I fear for Charlotte. Please let her be okay! Please update soon!

Ah. *tear* Mary Clarke. I like that.

...wait. Is Charlotte dead? Or dying? O.o

Ep now I'm nervous for more. :)

P.S. I notice that the character you put this down as was Norrington.

...Just found that amusing, somewhat. :D

Ah. This is even more heartbreaking than the movie.

The only flaw I've seen so far is that it's New South Wales, not whales. Otherwise, perfect so far. Are you going to continue? Please?

:) Keep up the great work.

*squeak* One chapter in and I like it. A lot.

And yeah, might have to suggest to the ff net staff to create a Mary Bryant category.

Anyway, onto the next few chappies.