Reviews for Inside'n outside
Guest chapter 1 . 1/15/2016
Good job. One more flame-less review
Guest chapter 1 . 12/17/2015
There has to be more stories like this. HAS to be. Because this is beautiful.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/3/2015
You wont get flamed (i hope) I LOVED THIS!
Shirubagure chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
Well I can't blame you making Allen a killer it could've been possible. This was still good though!
sinclairchap chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
For some reason I've always imagined little Allen, or nameless boy, to be like this. Don't know why though.
SwEeTnEsS chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
WrItE mOrE lIkE tHiS
Commander Zia chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
I won't flame you! I love this Allen :) I an;t help it- I love twisted/killer/fdarker-than-you'd-think drabble type- main characters; in partcular Allen. Aazing
tewak chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
I love it when you write Allen like this. He just can't always be smiling.

I, myself really like the idea that Allen is just faking it all. He had a harsh past so he just can't be some happy kid.

Yeah, sure Mana said 'keep walking forward'. He can walk forward at the same time he lies. It's just fine if his path is full of lies and 'faking'.

I really liked the color thing. how he could differently with his left and right. It's really awesome.

keep up the good work!

sincerely -shikamarurules1
Fibonacci to Infinity chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
Whoa. You captured the human heart. Wow. *Is Pretty Much Speechless*
NakedKing chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
i will not flame ur genius! i love~ this...its so angsty and awesome... gawd i love wen allen is like that...and the others find him being all depressed...and there like... WTF? O.o
Windy Rein chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
You should, in my opinion, continue this little series if it can be called that.. With every oneshot I've gotten deeper to Allen's world and you leave me craving more knowledge of that world.. So basically, I'm saying please write more.. You don't need to continue this one with another chapter but write another oneshot that connects with this/these, please?

Again, I adore your Allen. :)
knux33 chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
An amazing deepness that most people can't put properly into words. You have done that. Brava, Bravo!
Incredibalistic chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
Very interesting. Without him mentioning or revealing anything, I never thought much about Allen's life before Mana. I liked your take on it though, good job, and good writing
Josep Crea chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
This one is pretty nuts. I like the spin on two haves. You are lining him up with a Noah, which I have done a few times in theory. 50 for thinking outside the box!

addenza chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
O.o That was pretty cool~~
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