|Reviews for Breaking Free|
| Talon3 chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
This is good. I wonder what would happen if the story would continue on. But Lily and Harry leaving James and going to Severus, that was good. I have no idea if you would continue, but please do if you can.
| whitehound chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
Yes - it seems quite likely James would have ended up as a bullying husband. We know he was deceiving Lily after he started dating her, because he hid from her the fact that he was still hexing Severus: and when she tried to protect Severus from him he threatened her with violence.
A bit hard on Severus, though, to have her return to him only as second best - because she didn't want James, rather than because she did want Severus. But that would probably be just what she would do.