|Reviews for A Fate|
| Yyrollam chapter 13 . 4/15/2009
YOU SHOULD UPDATE LOVE THIS STORY BUT... I HATE THE BABY NAMES AND THE FACT THAT THERE ARE 4 LOL
| EnderACullen chapter 13 . 4/2/2009
Nice story. Hope you get the next chapter up soon!
| kateari17 chapter 13 . 2/2/2009
please please please continue!
| Ithil chapter 9 . 2/2/2009
I'm not sure if this is true for all funerals, but the meal held after the burial is called a bereavement meal. Not trying to be a smart aleck, just trying to help.
| Midnight Angels Say GoodNight chapter 12 . 10/7/2008
did she get these powers because of her selfless ness?
| aglblsm chapter 12 . 10/6/2008
tht is an awsom power that you gave bella. not one story that i read has that power for her...that i know of anyuway.
| Shstar chapter 12 . 10/6/2008
Cool, story but it is going a little too fast. try to slow it down a little bit. love it though.
| Caity katie chapter 11 . 9/6/2008
hurry up and post more!
| RosieWinterChild chapter 11 . 8/20/2008
update update update!
| DFergz chapter 11 . 8/1/2008
omg definately didnt see that coming but i realy wanna see what happens! finish please!
| RoryAceHayden147 chapter 11 . 8/1/2008
I can't wait until tomorrow!
Update soon and yes I did see that coming!
| queen-of-all-cupcakes chapter 10 . 7/26/2008
omgomgomgomg i love this story! nya
| lovelycullen24 chapter 10 . 7/26/2008
they are all good I liked em.I dont think you gave enough info on A new kid at the end for it to be a just my something that meant it was a threat to evevryone might have helped
| DFergz chapter 9 . 7/26/2008
L0l where you asked if 'party' was the right word for after the funeral I'm thinking maybe gathering? You seemed to be asking so thats just my opinion!
| DFergz chapter 7 . 7/26/2008
This chapter was written beautifully and I looked at Bella's dress on your profile... nice choice! It was gorgeous! Keep writing!