|Reviews for Swelling with love|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/9
Susan Storm was In her Underwear and bra and then took it off and was invisible but put them back on.
| lionkit chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
this story is really good. i really cant wait to find out what sue and reed are having.
update soon please! :)
| Devil Rebel chapter 18 . 5/18/2010
| Darkness777 chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
I had never read the What If issue that this story is based on, But I have heard about it and wanted to read it due to being a fantastic four fan. Though this story is like Spider Girl (Started in What If, then got it's own series), but only better.
My first impressions of the story was that it would be a enjoyble tale to look forward too. And I was right. The personalities of the charicter are spot on. I did enjoy Ultra Women a.k.a. Susan Storm the most as she brought out the spark that made me keep on reading. And that she would stick with Reed even though he is like the next Doctor Doom (Which I thought was a bit clever) nailed the strong relationship that they would still have.
The details were great, I didn't see any voids while I was reading. I could possible see this story in a comic and people would love to read it.
The little twist at the end was a pretty good twist for Ultra Women as I can't wait to see what happens while Ultra Women goes threw it.
Overall, this is a great read for Fantastic Four fans as well as others. I will review more chapters later. Great Start, Can't wait to read Chapter 2.
| Derek Metaltron chapter 4 . 11/9/2008
I've read the first four chapters of this so far and I have to say its a brilliant read on so many accounts. First off, you've got Reed and Susan's relationship down to a tee, and the differences in powers make for great and amusing stand offs. Second, you've got Susan at the forefront of the stories, which is great for me as she's always been my favourite member of the FF. And thirdly, you're using parallel versions of classic issues of the Fantastic Four. Its great to dig out my Essential Fantastic Four Vol 1 book out and see what you might alter, particularly as its a style of writing I use in my own What Ifs.
Anyway, I'll give you a full review properly when I've finished reading this, but great so far, you've got me looking forwards to the rest of this and Original Twist as well! :)
| Jin Shirinue chapter 13 . 10/12/2008
Sorry I haven't been reading your story I've been busy with real world activities, but always though that Johnny Storm's borderline womanizing ways needed to be taken down a notch, so good work there.
| Wolvmbm chapter 18 . 10/11/2008
First off I aplogize for not looking into this story as much as I should. I guess I was preoccupied with other things in my life.
Overall, this is a great twist of a tale telling the origins of the Fantastic Four and their many adventures together. Along with the evolution of the Alternate forms of Reed and Sue. :D
I have to say overall it was worth a ride learning of the lives of this alternate version of Marvel's First Family. To me it shows that you are a great writer and you have a great creative mind within in.
Please keep up the good writing for any future stories, and I promise to stop by when I get the chance to. ;)
| Wolvmbm chapter 15 . 8/19/2008
Wow Diplomatic Johnny Storm, Susan underwater and a Sentry apperance. :D
All nice points to another great chapter. :D
Still keep up the good work as this story progress. ;)
| Greysqueen chapter 11 . 7/9/2008
hey sorry i haven't reviewed in so long but i moved about a month ago with no computer and i just found a computer right now for a bit so i caught up on the story and i really like it and im getting to like medusa more she seems very cool.
| Greysqueen chapter 8 . 5/11/2008
haha i LOVE Gale!
this chapter was really good, like all the others. i like how it shows sue being motherly.
i really cant wait to find out what sue and reed are having.
is reed going to be able to use a machine to be like an ultrasound? because that would be sweet, since she is far enough to know what she is having.
update soon please! :)
| Greysqueen chapter 6 . 4/21/2008
again, that chapter was really good. im kinda glad the press knows about it..no more secrets. question though, usually when women are pregnant with twins they dont reach the full nine months so wouldnt sue have the babies earlier since she has 6?
| Jin Shirinue chapter 5 . 4/19/2008
This is a delightfully unique story. I can honestly say I haven't read something like this before.
| Greysqueen chapter 5 . 4/16/2008
i think it was smart for reed and sue not to tell johhny and ben what happened or they were gonna do some major ass kicking!
im glad they are talking more about their babies, like sue is more excited.
overall it was a good chapter.
| Greysqueen chapter 4 . 4/15/2008
good job, i like the story! :)
as far as your writting, its really good too.