Reviews for Rapture Tastes So Sweet
Kioko Yasu chapter 3 . 3/23/2012
"I've got something to put in you..." totally got the reference before the AN.

Also, I'm in love with this Zexion. I'm sick of him being just the quiet bookworm or, even worse, emo. This snarky sexy Zexion is amazing.
hpgirl4ever chapter 3 . 12/21/2011
Great story! D
obscene.blonde chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
This story is amaaaaaaazing! It deserves way more than 48 (now 49) reviews! I love how weird Xemnas is :)
ZemyxDexion chapter 3 . 4/27/2011
This was very odd and very interesting and very, very sexy.


Loved it, man. Keep up the awesome work!

Viilarus chapter 3 . 9/3/2010
/is a late reader-reviewer

I've always had a soft spot for bartenders; especially sexy ones with sexy customers sexing it up. Cx I love this fic, and you. 333

One of the things that causes me to curl up and snicker in my laptop-corner is the dialogue. That damned adorable and hilarious dialogue between Demmy, Zexy, and. Well. Everyone. :D

I loved the rules in Chapter 1. xDDD

And that poor, scarred girl on the train.

And the drug dealers and P-R-O-S-T-I-T-U-T-E-S.

And also ew Xemnas's raperifficness.

Ohgod there's just so much awesome. Thank you for writing and sharing this! c: /is happyhappeeee

(And sorry for the anonymous review! ;n; )
Shayala chapter 3 . 8/12/2010
Your Zexion is awsome. Really. I just love his internal monologue and embarrassing jobs, and incompatibility with animals. As a little bit of criticism, I didn't really like the whole Xemnas-hitting-on-Zexion thing. He's sadistic and creepy, but it didn't seem like the sort of thing he would do.

Anyway, I do love this story to bits.
luckless-is-me chapter 3 . 7/29/2010
Okay, so I told myself I wasn't going to review, and you know what? Screw it, I'm reviewing.

I love this. Seriously. Zexion and Demyx are my favorite couple ever and the way you write them, well...I think the word I'm looking for is a mix of the words "fucking" and "genius", whatever word that may be.

Anyway, I read your story "Just Like Magic!" and it made me happy because it was sort of witty funny and it made me laugh. And, well, to be brutally honest, I LOATHE comedy. Immensly. However, I love your particular style of comedy, therefore I love your writing (if this train of thought makes no sense, feel free to ignore it).

So~ to actually review the story:

At first, I wasn't so sure I was going to like this (somewhere back in chapter one), but hell, it's part one in the morning and I had nothing better to do, so I read on. And, I'm glad that I did.

I find it hilarious that Zexion can only work embarrassing jobs and it's fairly obvious that he hates them. Extremely (at least the firs one). And, in an extremely odd sort of way, ihm working at these places makes perfect sense to me (yes, I am, in fact, a freak).

The interactions between all the characters were amazing (and consistent- I hate it when they aren't consistent). And, you added real like into this story, because hell, it's not like by the end everything is just going to be hunky-dory; life doesn't really work like that.

So, anyway, this is entirely too long and I could prbably say ten million other things about this, but frankly, I'm lazy and don't particularly feel like boring you with the details that tell you EXACTLY why I love everything about this story, so I'm not going to.
teddikins chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
ha. well that was completely adorable.

rainbow cupcake chapter 3 . 8/13/2009
Neither my friend nor I could sleep, so she was reading this and sent it to me...

GLAD she did!


And just serious enough at times.

Awesome :) *thumbsup*

(Sorry if this makes NO's almost 4 in the morning. I should be sleeping XD)
Zackara chapter 3 . 7/15/2009
As promised, although you are probably tired of hearing from me by this point, a review of the entire story.

It was good.

Ok, seriously, I liked it. It didn't get old, but you didn't use those tired old bits about over coming their pasts or that shit. They had their shit, but it wasn't just about that. I really had fun reading it, it wasn't profound. It wasn't iconic, it didn't make me question all the things I thought I knew, but it was good. I got to the end, and wanted to read more. Thats always a sign of a well written peice. And it did make me want to change my writing. I realized I was writing one of those old tired plot lines, with my own twists thrown in, but didn't put enough of me into it. There wasn't any of my humor in it, or any of my personality. I read you story, and felt like I got a feel for your personality. Or at least your sense of humor. One of the things I like most about writing is that you can surrender yourself to the story, and that everything you write ends of effecting you in a very real way. And I get to see this in your writting. It tells me something about who you are, and thats what makes it so well written. So thank you. I trully believe that if a peice is written and makes people reading want to write better, it is a great peice. So thank you.

Zackara chapter 2 . 7/15/2009
Still think its a good thing that I haven't met you, because I have a feeling I would die of lafter if I did. So much wit, it burns us! Anyway, wasn't planning on reviewing, did anyway. Love this. Going to probably put you as like, my favorite internet person for the week. Seriously, I will pester you for wit, its something the rest of the world seems to lack as of late, and you might be the cure.

Zackara chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
I think I love you. Not for your actual story, but for your writing story, now, does that make any sense to you? ecause i just read it and it really doesn't. But things like 'the egergizer bunny, only evil and on viagra' just endears you to me. Is it weird that I'll probably end up internet stalking you just because you are sarcastic ironic and amazing? No? Ok. Just so you know, I won't, I'm lazy and sick. Which is why this is really really super weird. Actually its not, not for me anyway. I'm writing htis on cold meds, because I already coughed up my left lung this morning, and if I cough up the other I'll have to join Vexen with his breathing problems.

Why is it that I review more when I'm all drugged up? I mean the last time I reviewed a ton was when I had pnemonia, and we all know what that does to your . . . functioning . . . ability. That makes sense, right? Anyway, I like this story, and I like you. (In a completely non-creepy way) So I decided you deserved reviews. Yes, as in plural, I'll proably at least review the last one as well. Maybe not the middle one. Depend on how lazy I am. So drop me a message, because you are pretty fucking amazing.

8mylifebelike13 chapter 3 . 4/11/2009
I really did like this story. It made me smile and giggle alot, and Axel's random appearences made me cheet .
kodoku na oujo chapter 3 . 3/13/2009
I can't exactly tell you why, but I'm in love with this story. I'm not sure if it's all the little wonderful things about it all adding up or just one thing making it hard for me NOT to love it. Either way, I was sucked up into this story and it took a hold of me.

Well first off, I think I feel in love with your writing style right from the beginning. You write longer sentences than most authors I encounter, but you break most of them up with a quick and witty little insert that makes me want the sentence to continue on so I can laugh again. And yes... I was laughing my ass off as I read this story. You, my friend, are FUNNY! Oh god! There were times where my eyes started to WATER because I was laughing so hard.

Along with this story having it's wonderfully funny parts to it, you were also able to capture more serious moments within the story as well, without giving this story a real angsty feel to it (even though me and angst are good friends and I enjoy reading it). Like the part where Xemnas practically attacked poor Zexion. I serious almost cried because I was so terrified that Zexion was going to get rape by his boss. And then when Demyx had a small freak out moment when Zexion practically said that he was falling for him. Oh god. I was thinking the same thing that Zexion was, hoping that Demyx would ask him to stay. I think every good story needs a little healthy dose of drama. Cause... sometimes life IS dramatic.

I also really enjoyed Demyx's backstory. I don't know what it is about him, but I think he would be an awesome dad. Maybe it's cause he practically acts like a kid sometimes himself XD. And it's sad to say, but I do have a friend that got married almost immediately after graduating high school as well. I'm kind of hoping (and at the same time dreading) that they won't end up like Demyx and Clarissa's relationship. And I really hope they don't end up bitter like Clarissa.

Anywho... I have to say that I really liked how you added in songs into the story without breaking down and writing a songfic. Like with Axel singing (which was hilarious), to the chapter titles and even the name of the Gay Bar... Oh and btw, I LOVE that song. And even the playlist that you gave at the end of the story. I mean, music is awesome and if there are songs out there that suit the mood or help other visualize feelings and scenes, then that just makes it even better. You just don't always need to break up the rhythm of the story. Not that I'm against songfics, but... uh, nevermind. I hope you got what I was saying.

Well I think that I've rambled enough and will leave you now. Just to reiterate, I love this story! Just wonderful! Excellent work!

~Kodoku na Oujo
ForForever chapter 3 . 2/18/2009

That was awesome :D
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