Reviews for Unbreakable
JapaneseAnimeFreak16 chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
dude! that was awsome! but i started cringing when dean cried! it was soo sad! and i like your version of Belas family
Simoman chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
Great story but very bittersweet at the same time.

Great work!
sarah chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
very good i love dean/bela but it was too much put into one. like her having feelings for him so fast and him out of nowhere feeling the same was too much. plz write a next chapter but go slow with the relationship let it grow. great story on the other going!
fractured-fairytale06 chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
LOVE IT!

Especially that last line... I got a little misty, not gonna lie. )
warangel88 chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
i love it another dean/bela fic even though it was a bit sad.
Enrika721 chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
Okay, first of all, YES! Another Dean/Bela story! ;) (Sorry, I just think that they are a perfect couple)

As far as plot goes, this story was good. Same for characterization, that was also really well done. The actual writing was decent, as it a bit choppy and could be smoother. Sentance structure could have also used some variation.

Sorry if I sould like a critical bitch or something, I just saw some potential here and wanted to offer some advice.

Keep up the Dean/Bela love!

-Kat
lovelovelove chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
that was sad '( maybe write a sequel about how dean feels and how he is heartbroken or something like that...luv it
tattoos of memories chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
aww!

I like that you showed Bela's vulnerable side

i like that idea about her family...creative!

write more its so good!