Reviews for Through the Eyes of Alice Cullen
Diamond and Stars chapter 13 . 5/2/2008
wow, Your doing such a good job! Some parts i wouldn't even have thought of putting in. Like in the very beginning of the story while it was snowing, you put that Edward was the one who threw the snowball at Mike's head and then you incorperated that Eric just so happened to walk to wrong way to class. I liked that. ] Never thought it that way.

Good Job!


Diamond and Stars
caww chapter 13 . 5/2/2008
giggle giggle

That was just the way I wanted to read Chapter 13.

What a wonderful thought process. I liked it that Alice wanted to pick out clothes that said friendly for Bella...nice to see how good Bella is in Alice's eyes, and how happy Alice and the family saw Edward with Bella...sigh just beautiful writing and so comfortable feeling too.

take a break chapter 13 . 5/2/2008
aww this is a great chapter, i always loved when bella met edwards family and i love it from alice's pov aswell, it seemed so light and airy, its a greatside to the story and you wrote it well.

x kat
caww chapter 12 . 5/2/2008
I am so glad Alice is willing to check on Edward and Bella-their safety...and see that Alice liked Bella for protecting them by letting others know she wasn't going to Seattle.

I can see Esme being worried and with this nervous energy...thank goodness Alice can calme her and Jasper too.

It was good reading.

ellabella13 chapter 12 . 5/1/2008
I'm really enjoying your story, it's cool to see twilight from Alice's eyes. thank you, can't wait for the next chapter
CobhGirl3 chapter 11 . 4/30/2008
Aw cute chappie!
take a break chapter 11 . 4/29/2008
hey good job, i really like alice's point of view she has a good side to the story. again good job with the chapter
caww chapter 11 . 4/29/2008
So glad you like to type.

Good story...looking

to reading more when you have time.

caww chapter 10 . 4/28/2008
Very nice reading about the Cullen's reactions to Bella knowing.

looking forward to another chapter.

caww chapter 9 . 4/26/2008
I so liked it that Edward had been watching Bella outside while she slept. I had always hoped that was so too.

That was just great that Alice saw the visions.

I also like the fact you're putting more of Alice and Jasper's life together.

Looking forward to the next chapters.

SignedSealedWritten chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
Just kind of bookmarking this to read later...
caww chapter 8 . 4/25/2008
OHH so that's how it was to get Rosalie to go

to the Prom...

giggle giggle.

I love Alice's concern for what Bella wears.

Thanks for your version.

fun fun fun

Romennim chapter 8 . 4/25/2008
good idea.. update soon!
xXxElianexXx chapter 8 . 4/25/2008
This is great, but it's obvious you don't speak french. You said Good Phillipe of morning, it's alice changed(thats what reforme means, though it dont know how you got that instead of cullen)Inside Los Angeles(it should be 'a') and I would like a meeting in your Los Angeles to order some items.. etc the rest was correct. The french say bonjour all day, It means good morning as well. It should be je suis a( with an accent going like )Los Angeles et j'aimerais un rendez-vous dans votre succursale( or bureau)a(again with an accent like ) Los Angeles.

Hope that helps x
CobhGirl3 chapter 8 . 4/24/2008
I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm so happy that you gave a small background story to Bella's prom dress. And Rosalie being happier was refreshing. Since she wasn't originally so mean, according to the notes in the outtakes on . Keep up the good work!
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