Reviews for Order
LifesLover chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
Aw, that was so cute and so sweet. Even a little corny but it was so cute. Poor Zexion, losing his parents like that had to have not been very nice or anything. Times like that truly suck.

*snicker* Can I help but find it funny that Zexion was checking out Demyx's bare chest? Well, at least he knows what he wants and intends on going for it.

I really liked that whole 'Order' and 'Chaos' thing you had througout the entire oneshot. It was a recurring theme and it helped reiterate Zexion's and Demyx's personalities.

Good job. I really enjoyed it. And yay to the Zemxy- my favorite pairing!

Destatikai chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
Aw, that was a cute one-shot. I like the way you portrayed Zexion's need for control... sounds very Zexion-like, haha.