Reviews for Neglect
xLaramiex chapter 2 . 6/5/2008
you already know what i think. tis cool :)
Midnight's Queen chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
Is there a second chapter coming up? Does Hem run away? It was really good, and if there is a second chapter coming, I really want to read it!
burninganchors chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
**sob** That is so sad! I loved it so much!

There are a few typos, like "are faces" should be "our faces," but other than that it was just punctuation.

I loved it so much! Poor, innocent Hem!
Zanna chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
Loved it! Where did you get the idea? You should write more, to get rid of the suspense hovering over it.