Reviews for Losing Face
solonaur chapter 2 . 9/13/2009
Ha! I'm really enjoying this-can't wait for Sanzo's reaction when everything comes out in the open. Hope you'll keep writing!
Isaname chapter 2 . 8/28/2009
I wish you would update this. So much. It's been a while since I've read/watched saiyuki and now I've gotten hooked all over again because of this delight of a story. It has a really nice flow and is easy to read (in that it doesn't make my eyes bleed from bad grammar, spelling and structure... Which isn't all that often on :D).

(Also Wam is awesome, just so you know )
Atheist1 chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
Interesting storyline. Anticipating the development of the story. Please update soon. :)
Steph -Ifni no Miko chapter 2 . 2/3/2009
Hi! I'm really enjoying this story! ::snrks:: I am especially amused by Hakkai thinking he's gotten away with the snuggles and Goku and Gojyo freaking out. Can't wait to see more!
HeWhoCrys chapter 2 . 1/22/2009
Cool story! are you going to update soon? I can't wait to read! Who was that prest and did he really mean sanzo was a demon or just hating him like everyone else?
Freaking Cage chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
You know it's funny, I always end up empathizing with Gojyo when reading your stories, for whatever odd reason. I loved KF, so I really hope you continue with this one as well. The start is already perfect for me, you've set the mood really well. It's entertaining and if it continues to be 83, you've already hooked me by the fact there's no lust involved. Or cheesy pick up lines. Geh, now I'm venting.

Anyway, may your muses lead you back to this for all 83/38/whatever fans. :D
Natalie Beck chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
I'm really like this story. When I first started reading the very first part of it I was thinking, "Is this Sanzo and Hakkai or a couple?" Uh, pretty much both, I guess. I'm excited to see where this is going, so I hope you update soon!
anaji chapter 2 . 12/16/2008
I love this story. I love the relationship between sanzo and hakkai and the progression from Keeping Face. Please, please update. I have to say, this is one of the best Sanzo/Hakkai fics that I've come across on .
Setsuna-X chapter 2 . 12/14/2008
Wow, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I personally have nothing against boyxboy pairings and the such, but for this story I would actually rather just see it as an attraction sort of thing, more platonic than romantic between any of the characters. Regardless, I love this story so I hope the next chapter comes out soon!
Vathara chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
You caught the characters' voices wonderfully, and the talks between Hakkai and Sanzo are fun to listen in on. Plus, sneaky Hakkai makes me grin. Are there going to be more chapters? *Hopes*
SashaS chapter 2 . 9/19/2008
I've been following this story from the first chapter of Keeping Face, and I like this. Really nice. Just wondering, is this to become a Sanzo/Hakkai-ish fic?
Everybody's Neesan chapter 2 . 7/24/2008
I'm really liking this so far, but I'm a little torn. I dislike reading pairings between the boys, but I loved the previous story so much that I started reading this one anyway. Will the pairings become more... graphic, or will I be happy to keep reading?
Sanz0girl chapter 2 . 7/19/2008
Oh. I love 38 83 pairing. no 39 93, pretty please?

I loved keeping Face. so glad you made a sequel.
Rayven chapter 2 . 7/4/2008
"There was something fundamentally wrong with Sanzo becoming a demon."

Which is true, I guess. He's the token human for a reason - to prove a point - humans can be merciless, and kill, and be savage.

But...still quivering in anticipation, here. Though I kind of feel that the slashiness is detracting away from the focus on humanity/race and what makes a person what they are.

Can't wait to see what happens next!
VampireDoll666 chapter 2 . 7/3/2008
Ah, I'm so happy *squeals* that you updated this. I have been waiting for this, and looking out for this forever. But I have to say that Gojyo and Goku have it all wrong. It's one-sided, Hakkai is the one always going next to Sanzo, Sanzo has no idea that it is even happening. What they need to do is just ask and they will see that Sanzo has no clue what Hakkai is doing when he's asleep. Oh and that new monk *scouls* I HATE HIM TOO. I hope he doesn't take it upon himself to torment Sanzo, or if he does I hope he dies a very VERY horrible death. *smiles* I love this story and it's only 2 chap.s can't wait for no.3 PLEASE DON'T MAKE US WAIT TO LONG!
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