|Reviews for Beyond the Game|
| KHandFF7fanforever chapter 5 . 2/17
This is really good, confusing, but good
| mirakiayah chapter 5 . 11/9/2013
Are you going to try and finish this story, cause it's kinda awesome... Lol, write please!
| Knitted chapter 2 . 1/9/2013
So far, this is super awesome. I love it so much. You don't use big, obnoxious words like so many authors. You use words that put you into the story and help it flow so nicely. Also, the plot is great. I'm really, really enjoying this so far.
| skywiseskychan chapter 5 . 2/1/2011
This story is incredible. I am truely enjoying it and it just continues to get better with each chapter. I am looking forward to reading more.
| alex chapter 2 . 1/1/2011
i dont understand, is this girl on a space ship (if not i wonder what gave me this idea)
if she is, how is she managing to tslk to graff with this interactive hologram? as per the ender's game universe time dilation would make such communication (at light speed) impossible
| Shadowdancer21b chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
This belongs in books. There is not a movie version of Ender's Game.
| JD chapter 5 . 12/21/2008
Hi there. A good story so far, much of the pacing is well done and the general narrative arc has a solid base. Alex is developed pretty well, although I think that some of the other characters can be a bit flat and could use more showing of their traits. Some attempts made ad descriptive text could be done without, as they're misleading or not really effective in the story-telling. THey're well-written, but I find them to be unnecessary. I think that there could stand to be some general editting as well, as certain word combinations and grammatical styles tend to be confusing. Still, I like where it's going and am eager to read the rest, overall, well done.
| ReAdErWrItErWhAtEvEr chapter 5 . 6/24/2008
hello, writer. i'd just like to clarify whats happening and please correct me if i am wrong. so when the line was,"and my only friend doesn't know anything about me," was that referring to Ender, like he was her friend. Also, she's on those ships that were heading out to fight against the buggers, so shes going to die. Third, this is where i get more unsure. She was born on the ship but was expected to have super ability or something close? oh and a question is, what exactly is wrong with her? is she slow or what? If you could reply, telling me if i am right or wrong-that would be great. thanks
| samsamtastic chapter 4 . 6/5/2008
This is the first Ender's Game fanfic I have ever read and I love it! I hope you update soon
| RandomReviewer chapter 3 . 6/5/2008
An interesting chapter... update soon.
| ReAdErWrItErWhAtEvEr chapter 2 . 4/21/2008
kinda weird..im not sure where this takes place...otherwise its really good, the writing quality
| kessacirtos chapter 2 . 4/16/2008
Hello! I figured that you could use a review. Your story is intriguing, I'd like to see how your "disabled" girl becomes important in the end. For the most part, your writing is excellent. I enjoyed, particularly, how you explained the lag in conversation between Alex and Graff. In the previous chapter, I noticed a few repetitive errors. Nothing too big so far as grammar stands out, but then, I wasn't trying to be nit-picky. Don't give up hope. Sincerely, Kessa