Reviews for Broken Soul
BlackCatNeko999 chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
Oh, how sad! Please write more ;)
Two amazing pairings.
Hellocloser chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
Omg, sequel please. This was very well written despite being short, koodos to you!
Miss.Jessi-Pon chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
u should write a sequel as like they descover him dead and he appears to Lenalee and Lavi as a ghost or sumthing :D
timisnotmyname chapter 1 . 10/1/2009

so sad
Hikari chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
Awhh, poor Allen! :-( I really feel sorry for him. Lenalee should've just loved him back...
IOTR chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
*sniffle* T-T
KenRik chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
Man, you must be kidding when you said you had grammar errors. hehehe, for me it was a smooth sail while reading. :) Man, do I feel sad for Allen. :) Wonderful job. :D
the shuai ge D LOL chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
HEY hajimari:D nice story! BUT some of the words too CHIM dun understand. Nxt tym use simpler words ok:D haha and i can see that you did not continue your collaboration story with yinlin56. Keep up with the good work:D Remember to continue the collaboration after one month lols let yinlin56 wait in frustration lols.
yinlin56 chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
You made Allen suffer so much! okay, nvm, since lenalee is with Lavi! And... Its is really short, but still nice.
addenza chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
*sob* Poor Allen.. T.T