|Reviews for On White Horse|
| Mylesdude chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
| Dancing Feather chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
Oddly enough, the only big issue I have with this one is that I think the poem would have a stronger hold if you put the 3rd stanza at the top. It gives the reader the main figure to imagine while the rest just knits the extra details. Not bad!
| SpiritFanNumber1 chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
i liked that!