Reviews for On White Horse
Mylesdude chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
Dancing Feather chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
Oddly enough, the only big issue I have with this one is that I think the poem would have a stronger hold if you put the 3rd stanza at the top. It gives the reader the main figure to imagine while the rest just knits the extra details. Not bad!
SpiritFanNumber1 chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
i liked that!