|Reviews for A Chocolate Kiss|
| MountKeyeswithWings chapter 1 . 11/10
I love this story. None of the characters are OOC, and it's really good writing. I read this like four times in a row. This is totally my favorite fanfiction ever. The ending could have a bit more work, because it seemed a tiny bit rushed, but everything else was absolutely amazing.
| Maica Sanfe chapter 1 . 9/17
This is so cute. You should right one with Iggy and nudge.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/24/2016
That was soooo cute! I loved every part of it! This fanfic is what I was looking for, great job!
| Fandomsrule10 chapter 1 . 1/16/2015
Adorable! Sweet Faxy goodness, sweet Faxy goodness.
| Pure-Hazard chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
| Keo chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
When did you get murdered? It wasn't in the papers...
| Kina Kalamari chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
I haven't really read Maximum Ride fanfiction in nearly two years, and to be honest I'm not quite sure how I ended up here. But I actually quite enjoyed this fic, despite having thoroughly lost interest in the series.
Anyway, I know this is a very old story and it's possible you won't ever even see this review, but I just wanted to let you know that you managed to hook someone who couldn't care less about the fates of the characters at this point. Good work. :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
| iamchris chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
Hehe it's a little confusing at times, and Max is a little OOC, but it's adorable! I love the cookie FAX in this! :)
| OceanPenguin chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
| AinsleyWright chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
I love it. You should write more like this.
| MidnightGlows chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Awwweeee that was completely and utterly cute!
| mops r kool chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
Awww that was perfect
| Amy Shaar chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
i dont know what your talking about. I understood that completely and though it was fantastic!
| toseekoriginality chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
Awwwwwww! I do actually think that they're quite in character...