|Reviews for A Chocolate Kiss|
| Kina Kalamari chapter 1 . 1/5
I haven't really read Maximum Ride fanfiction in nearly two years, and to be honest I'm not quite sure how I ended up here. But I actually quite enjoyed this fic, despite having thoroughly lost interest in the series.
Anyway, I know this is a very old story and it's possible you won't ever even see this review, but I just wanted to let you know that you managed to hook someone who couldn't care less about the fates of the characters at this point. Good work. :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
| iamchris chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
Hehe it's a little confusing at times, and Max is a little OOC, but it's adorable! I love the cookie FAX in this! :)
| OceanPenguin chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
| AinsleyWright chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
I love it. You should write more like this.
| MidnightGlows chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Awwweeee that was completely and utterly cute!
| mops r kool chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
Awww that was perfect
| Amy Shaar chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
i dont know what your talking about. I understood that completely and though it was fantastic!
| toseekoriginality chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
Awwwwwww! I do actually think that they're quite in character...
| Queen of Narnia49 chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
This one-shot was so wonderfully Faxy and mushy (but don't worry not overly so) and not corny. I wish there were more out there like this.
As for constructive criticism, I don't really have any. It was pretty much perfect.
-Queen of Narnia49
| thorn chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
Beautiful. Can you please tell me the secret meaning of this story that you hinted at? please? If you don't want to i understand but i'll die if i don't know. I've had fax deprevation for a while and you saved me thanks.
P.S. I like when you put fin at the end of your stories, it sounds more romantic, with fax, ya know. It just completes faxness.
| ksdjcb chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
I LOVE THIS!
so cute, so faxy!
And yes, I actually do think I get that entirely
| Kyo Kun 4ever chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
THAT WAS AWESOMELY CUUUUUUUTTTEEE! I LUV YUUUU
| StormySeaEyes chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
Great job! If I didn't know any better I'd say you were James Patterson. Love Fang in this one!
| Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
Perfect balance of Fax, humor, and chocolate chip cookies.