Reviews for The Agreement
s0phtt chapter 27 . 6/29
I must say i feel a little cheated with this ending. I really loved the story as a whole but Hinata ending up with Naruto and Sasuke's son was distasteful for me. I was thinking It would be Neji or maybe Shino, or any other ninja, but being a person she gave birth to despite not being related by blood was something that really irked me. Congrats anyway for as i said the plot as a whole was really enjoyable
SasuNaru's Loyal Fangirl TDDUP chapter 1 . 12/5/2017
I love this story. But I can't help to well get mad at some parts. I mean, polygamy is my most hated type of relationship. The story is good tho. I've been rereading I just now see the foreshadow clearly. It's vague. But I remember Sasuke saying like father like son to Kitsu. lol nice
chaosxxx chapter 4 . 12/3/2017
naruto sandwiches
SasuNaru's Loyal Fangirl TDDUP chapter 1 . 7/10/2017
Hah! I didn't spoil anything in my comment below xD Love this story by the way.
SasuNaru's Loyal Fangirl TDDUP chapter 27 . 7/10/2017
Dude. That's a happy ending there. But. Now that was awkward Hahaha. I rubbed my eyes in disbelief, literally, if I'm really reading this right. I'm sure that Naruto and Sasuke's feelings will not change (if only to get stronger, maybe yes) but the way you've written some part, made me wary a bit there, and read fast straight to the ending. I guess, it cannot be help. Someone, at least one, ought to inherit Sasuke's twisted nature. But I'm actually kinda happy that Naruto and Sasuke will be officially married! Just the two of them. Let's just excuse the awkwardness between the other newly wed couple, and sympathize with Tenpi.
yumenohime-sama chapter 27 . 6/2/2017
OH MY GOD... I never expected it to end up like this. I thought it will be Sasuke and Naruto ditching both Hinata and Sakura at couple of first chapter, but after a while I believe that the three of them will be happily live together, specially with the 'adoration' Sasuke had for Hinata. To actually make Hinata married Kitsu is kinda... unexpected and so twisted.. LOL~ just like Tenpi, i got mixed feeling about the ending, but at the other hand, i love how unexpected it turned out to be... all because of the weird advices Sasuke gave Kitsu... but how come Hinata could still get pregnant? unless she was married around her early 20s... hmmm...

anyway, i really love this story~~ :D
ahans1b chapter 27 . 4/29/2017
This story was so good! The ending had a funny surprise twist. Loved the entire thing.
sapphire80 chapter 27 . 7/15/2016
well that was an interesting story, i really liked from start to finish with all the good and bad but yeah out of everything i think that last bit with mother and son... i don't care that they are not related the fact remains unless if i am mistaken she lived and raised him in her home along with sasuke and naruto o.o i fully agree with their children's disgust lol that was just wrong on so many levels, anytime they stressed the point they are not related i groan, so what?! its not incest so perfectly ok? as far as i am concerned he came out of her, that is your mom dude xD
sapphire80 chapter 22 . 7/15/2016
pauses mid chapter omg, of all the things I was expecting it wasn't that reaction! that is SOME logic to non consensual sex wow! cx
sapphire80 chapter 20 . 7/15/2016
damn that was emotional T_T
sapphire80 chapter 19 . 7/15/2016
so glad he knows now hmm well not surprising so far how the news went over too and honestly idk how Sasuke can dig himself out of this, like I said a few chapters back, its a double whammy of unforgivable manipulations, I know I would be hard pressed to forgive if at all if I were in Naruto's shoes
sapphire80 chapter 18 . 7/15/2016
oh god! the next chapter gives me hope! the truth really needs to come out now, more than due before someone gets hurt worse than a hit to the face or make the situation even more complicated
sapphire80 chapter 17 . 7/15/2016
geez the suspense! at this point I just want all the secrets to be out so can move past the complicated mess that is the four of them lol its getting unbearable especially Naruto still being in the dark
sapphire80 chapter 14 . 7/15/2016
oh boy oh boy oh boy! drama heats up! Sasuke is sinking deeper and deeper and can blame no one but himself shakes head, he really didn't think this through all the way
sapphire80 chapter 11 . 7/15/2016
messed up indeed xD
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