Reviews for Inked
lynna12000 chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
This is a great beginning. The cast is in character; you have written the dialogue perfectly. The only thing that would make this more perfect is to have the next part immediately.
CDR Blaine chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
Wow! You've done an excellent job with characterization. Each of them is well written and fits with their personality. I'm looking forward to reading more- soon I hope.
tonnie20021969 chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
Excellent storyline. I don't normally like first-person, but this is perfect. I'm looking forward to the next installment.
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