Reviews for Today Is Your Birthday
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
soooooo sad but so goooood
Miki Panda-chii chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
aww that's really cute it it mayed me sad u should make a story out of the poem it whould be realy good eneyway good job
Harveste Starr chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
Aww~! That's really cute, good job!
The Fallen Empress chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
OMG~

*sniff*

that almost made me cry! good one! . so sad! ...yet nice. XD *thumbs up*
kesha alcantara chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
ei, you know what? though it's short, i like the ending..
Tonee Alto chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
WAH! sniffle...
o0charlee0o chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
I wish you really would make a story from that. Explaining how they fell in love. For example, Natsume is about to die. And the cliche is that his whole life flashes in front of his eyes. But he only had a life with Mikan. So only that comes and goes.
BaltoGirl chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
O... that story was so cute! I had tears to my eyes! (Note: They did not come out!) It made me want to cry! Wow! You should write a story like that one day!

BaltoGirl
Cherri Snow chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
aw!~ I LUV IT!
StarAngel02 chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
its really very nice :)
Coral in the moon chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
Wow that's really good! Keep it up!
gag577 chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
hey...i really like your poem...

and it made me cry!

swear!

ok that's all...

again, it's nice...

~gag577~
Keiko Oda chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
:(( OMG THIS IS SO HEARTBREAKING AND SAD.

I LOVE IT SO MUCH!

I'm adding this to my favorites.

:(( :(( so sad, so poignant. you're amazing. :)
aiyen chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
O.K... Here's my review.

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To tell you honestly I am not a big fan of poems which do not rhyme (Is that the correct spelling? hahaha.. sorry)

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So again as I was saying I prefer those kind of poems... But still, I liked your poem. The message of it was so nice that it made me read your poem till the end.

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I like how you wrote the poem. It's so sad yet it's so touching specially how Mikan stood by Natsume through his bad times.

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I tell you, it really is nice. You portrayed in your poem what truly means..

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Peace out and God Bless!
silvertears.cs chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
That was really sweet, but very heartbreaking. I like the part where Mikan said she loved him, and he replies that he's dying, but she still loves him even with the probabilty of him dying. It's just very forlorn. I'd love to hear your thoughts on my stories.