Reviews for Not a Dream
celajwhitney chapter 13 . 6/2
gee, jacob has a very short memory and doesn't think anything of going back on his word to bella? glad she's going to italy with edward, if he gets his memory back she will get the life they were going to have together.
celajwhitney chapter 12 . 6/2
if this is after eclipse and bella is nearly nineteen and already graduated from high school, why does charlie still try to tell bella what she can and can't do? this doesn't make sense to me.
MrsUnicornCullen118 chapter 19 . 6/28/2014
I'm sorry, but I was in love with this story until chapter seventeen. I was truly excited about them having their memories back. But then Edward to be changed into a HUMAN?! Despicable. I cried for the reasons how this was NOT supposed happen, fanfiction or not. I was devastated. I AM devastated. *sigh* so Edward Cullen/Mason and Bella Swan will grow old together and have a normal relationship. How fantastic. Only to leave behind the whole world of immortality and FORGET about it?! To leave behind their family?! Carlisle I'm sure would not deal with that greatly, and Esme even more so. I'm sorry to be ranting like this but it really has upset me that I was enjoying something and it to be ruined by something that was wholly unnecessary. Vampire Edward and Bella are how it's supposed to be. I would of MUCH preferred to have a Jacob/Bella story. MUCH. You are a fantastic writer, honestly, but this idea however, is not. I'm unbelievably upset and angry. Not to mention how this "potion" would never even be made, practically impossible. The whole love story is based on the happy ending that Bella had always wanted. Shouldn't have agreed to Edward changing into a human just like 'that'. I'm not reading anymore. I'm mortified.
Louisvuittonfreak chapter 21 . 7/10/2012
Great ending... I loved it...just sad about not being with the family...
leesmee chapter 21 . 7/22/2011
The story was great. Are you still apart of fan fiction ? If not how did you kick the habit ?
leesmee chapter 20 . 7/22/2011
aww sweet
leesmee chapter 19 . 7/22/2011
no way
leesmee chapter 18 . 7/22/2011
leesmee chapter 17 . 7/22/2011
leesmee chapter 16 . 7/22/2011
uh oh
leesmee chapter 15 . 7/22/2011
It looks pretty bad
leesmee chapter 14 . 7/22/2011
Edward being so detached is weird
leesmee chapter 13 . 7/22/2011
wow ..what next
leesmee chapter 12 . 7/22/2011
leesmee chapter 11 . 7/22/2011
I don't like this part ...
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