|Reviews for Seven Village Stomp|
| Garahs chapter 2 . 7/21/2009
Still loving this. Though I have to say, the firebreathing techniques aren't spoken aloud. Experienced shinobi are less likely to say any of their techniques out loud, but shounen rules I guess...
| Perfect Lionheart chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
That was one of the most creative and imaginative uses of Genma that I have ever seen.
| gambit chapter 2 . 7/14/2009
Damn, nice hook, too bad you say this story's just a romp. These first two chapters were fantastic, loved the wedding crashing, that was damn hilarious! I love how you've done Genma too; I agree the guy's not someone to look up to, but far too many people take the easy route and bash him.
Really wish you'd continue with this.
| Hitokiri Onib chapter 2 . 7/13/2009
A traveling ranma story... With tag alongs to boot! SweeT!
the battle scenes are great! and since the title is seven village stomp i'm guessing some more nuttiness with a rapping cloud ox is to come!... or not. Meh shame this isn't one of your priority stories. its quite enjoyable.
And you have proven that anything can be accepted if accompanied with a proper explanation.(chakra/ki)
For that i salute you.
And i also hate you. I hate you like a 5 year old hates the old story teller that has forced him to go to bed. Damn cliffhangers.
... Btw if Gai ever hear genma say those things... I would say that soun and panda-man would have a new drinking, crying, over reacting partner... And a little bushy browed overtly enthusiastic apprentice... in green. Please make this happen if you decide to continue.
| Wonderbee31 chapter 2 . 7/9/2009
You know, this is a fun read here, really enjoying the banter between Ranma and Genma, like the better kinds of buddy movies out there, and just shows how much they've gotten to know one another over the years, and will be fun to see what else happens with this odd group as they keep going on.
| Honebar chapter 2 . 7/9/2009
I have to say I love this story. _ just picturing hinata as she bows and then turns her back on her father was pricless. _ when genma was preaching about being a good father had me in giggles. I really do hope you will write a bit more of this.. heh heh 'once i figure out how to untie you' giggles
| Chasuzen chapter 2 . 6/8/2009
Great crossover! However my sole issue with your fic is your use of past and present tenses.
ex. Glancing between Lion Mask and Hiashi, Ranma admires his handiwork. Perhaps he isn't quite as elegant as his father, but the pigtailed boy has managed to create his human basket.
Revised. Glancing between Lion Mask and Hiashi, Ranma admired his handiwork. It wasn't as elegant as his fathers, but nonetheless he had managed to create a human basket.
The main issue is that your using present tense descriptions for your fic when you should be using past. (present would be better for POV of first person, as a general rule of thumb past tense is the best for fics like yours.) Other than that you overuse terms like "bespectacled man" / "pig tailed boy". Such descriptions are best when used sparingly. Ranma/Genma or even he are fine for normal use.
Just my two cents, other than that great story so far. Please continue your work.
| swiftrabbit chapter 2 . 5/27/2009
The story is funny and character dispositions are right on, but really, Hiashi not noticing a chakra/ki buildup of any kind? Hiashi's Kaitens not making giant craters? You really nerfed the guy. Genma just swatted him away like a fly in that battle. And realistically there is no way for Hiashi to lose track of genma in any way unless he went underground. Neji's byakugan can stretch kilometers in all directions as shown when he was looking for the seals before finding Gaara shoudn't hiashi be able to see a few feet above him and anticipate any hits even with his arrogance in the way? Genin Neji showed more skill than your hiashi did in that fight.
| Sdarian chapter 2 . 5/21/2009
This is looking to be a great story. I'm wondering if there will be other crossovers added in (a new one for every one of the Seven Villages that are being Stomped?), but regardless of that, this is still pretty good.
I'm really looking forward to seeing more of this (and especially an update for Eldrich as well). Good luck!
| Demon Lord of Blood chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
pretty good keep going
| Hat O' Doom chapter 2 . 5/16/2009
Well at least you're upfront about updates and whatnot for the readers. Hope the next chapter comes around soon, its a fantastic read.
| Wulfenbach chapter 2 . 5/9/2009
Oh PLEASE tell me you are going to keep them there in the Naruto world for a while longer.
| TitanX7 chapter 2 . 5/1/2009
Love the story! The level of detail work is excellent! Update Soon!
| Midoriryu chapter 2 . 4/28/2009
Very different story you've got here. It's the first I've read where both Ranma AND Genma show up there. In this chapter Genma's usage of the iron cloth technique was brilliant. It'll be interesting how Hinata and Naruto turn out with Ranma and Genma to look up to.
| AbyssalDaemon chapter 2 . 4/27/2009
I just recently got around to checking this story out and am glad that I did so. I usually find myself dislike Ranma crossovers do to how often the physical abilities and skill in martial arts get so heavily nerfed, so thank you for writing not only a well writen fic but one that stays true to Ranmaverse.
Also thank you for a well written Genma that isn't bashing him! That has become a major point of annoyances for me in most Ranma fics. Most people seem to not only forget the fact that the man for all his faults is one of the better martial artists to appear in the series but does also for that he does to Ranma that the man does care for him.
My one major critism is over Hinata and her stuttering. The only times that she seems to do it was talking to Naruto and even then once she got started she quit it.