Reviews for Wish Granted
Allegra.Jane.Alec chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
hehe... nice
dazzled01218 chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
"'Edward...' she let a small giggle out

'Yes, love?'

'I think we broke the bed, again.'"

lmao. that was great!
Edward4eva chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
really good

poor jacob, {

u know u could have kept going it didn't need to be a one-shot!
GreenArrowRocks chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
O' MY GOSH! It was the cutest story. When I got to the end though, I couldn't stop laughing. I really enjoyed it.
Emmett'sGirl2393 chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
the end was so funny! that was really sweet!
mytwilightaddiction chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
cute:} great one-shot!
Slaifer chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
I think we broke the bed, again. ha,ha,ha,hah,a,ha,hah,ahah, nice one.

The story was lovely, good job!
FairyVampire chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
that was really cute! i enjoyed it a lot.
not done baking chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
This was really good and your English is wonderful. Better than some native speakers. c:

My only real comment is that I don't think this story needed the lemon in there, it didn't move the plot along or develop anything. Having the story end at "It's more fun this way," would have been a really sweet and cute ending as well as the humorous one. And perhaps it's because you have such a heavy topic at the beginning that it feels odd that you end it so lightly.

While the writing is really good I'm just not sure you had the right amount of build up.
10thandrose chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
This was lovely.

Jessica